I'm sorry I never have anything appropriate or coherent for you to read when I comment on your writing. To me, this is amazing. I love the descriptions of people and the conversation that cuts into the story, and how it all just, flows together. Don't ever delete this because it is at the least, my favorite thing you've ever written. I literally said, "Oh my god" and I was worried when you were describing the landing.
I know you think I'm bias and you never really take my opinions seriously because I never have anything bad to say, but that's because it's just fucking good. And, oh my God, it is, I can't even form something better to say right now because my mind is still into the story. Sometimes, I think it's just me, too, and maybe I'm idealizing it, but after reading this, I know it's not, and you really are just that talented.
Fucking amazing.
anonymous
April 27 2007, 09:58:34 UTC
Seriously, this is a great story. And awesomely written. At least if the band thing takes a while to take off, you can write shit for a living. Just an idea. My favorite line was "he calmly stated at the top of his lungs"...you just use words in a great way. And "I haven't learned how to mix poetry with reality yet"...great lines, fella. Great lines.
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I know you think I'm bias and you never really take my opinions seriously because I never have anything bad to say, but that's because it's just fucking good. And, oh my God, it is, I can't even form something better to say right now because my mind is still into the story. Sometimes, I think it's just me, too, and maybe I'm idealizing it, but after reading this, I know it's not, and you really are just that talented.
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My favorite line was "he calmly stated at the top of his lungs"...you just use words in a great way. And "I haven't learned how to mix poetry with reality yet"...great lines, fella. Great lines.
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