Pervenche

May 24, 2008 13:08

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Characters/Pairing: TYL!Yamamoto, Gokudera; mention of TYL!8059
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,371
Worksafe: Up to your discretion. (Read warning)
Warnings: It's not really pedophilic; but it kinda touches on it?
Author's Note: For templated. From...looooong ago, in a galaxy far, far away from reality.... Also, reading ( Read more... )

char: gokudera hayato, pairing: tyl!8059, char: tyl!yamamoto takeshi, rating: pg-13, fandom: khr

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ravient May 25 2008, 12:52:42 UTC
XDDD SO CUTE!!! I can imagine how Hayato react when he found himself making out with Yamamoto! XDD Nice fic!!! ^^b

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binni May 26 2008, 01:06:41 UTC
I would pay a LOT of money to see that happen in the manga and anime!! *is waiting for it*

Thanks so much~!!

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ch1zuru May 25 2008, 18:10:20 UTC
OMG I LOVE THIS AND ALL YOUR OTHER FICS. But you already know that. xDD <33333
Guuuuh, I really like how you captured Gokudera's reaction, and the awkward atmosphere. xDDD Oh yeah, and another thing I've always loved about your writing is how you add in all those little details, like Yamamoto's thoughts about clothes folding, the blackmail. xDDD Great job!
(sorry, it's morning and I can't make a coherent comment. xDD)

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binni May 26 2008, 01:08:34 UTC
LOL I think if I forget to add those details, I actually forget what they're supposed to be doing. They might end up in Paris all of a sudden XD (*__* WHICH WOULD TOTALLY BE ROMANTIC)

LOLOL BEHOLD MY FAIL!ICON.

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ch1zuru May 26 2008, 01:14:49 UTC
OMG IT TOTALLY WOULD. <33333 I can just imagine it now...them two outside making out in front of the Eiffel tower at night with fireworks in the background...*____*

HOW'S THIS ICON

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binni May 26 2008, 01:36:06 UTC
I LOVE IT. ASODGJIAWMLKSGNJ!!!!!!

AND--AND--FIREWORKS WOULD BE GOING OFF, AND EVERYTHING--*GASP*--IT'S THEIR HONEYMOON~~~!! OR--OR MOULIN ROOOUUUUUUGE~~~~~~~~~ *mad editing skillz*

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livewithenvy June 4 2008, 02:51:57 UTC
"Do you have--!" He paused again for a moment, Yamamoto's eyes narrowing. Gokudera's voice fell to a harsh whisper. "Do you have ED ( ... )

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binni June 18 2008, 04:27:06 UTC
Haha~~!! xDD I'm glad you got so much amusement~!! It was really fun writing X3

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thisistony June 18 2008, 01:41:16 UTC
Okay, yeah, so I memory'd this and read it like five times, so uh, commenting now.

(even if Tsuna was a little freaked out by it most of the time)
Just a little. Politely put, 80. *claps*

Yamamoto supposed responsibility and respect would actually one day stick to Gokudera and hold.
But it hadn't yet, even his current ten-years-later-self.

"Okay, fine," Yamamoto conceded.
Oh TLY!80, you know Gokkun so well ♥

(they must have been the ones Gokudera threw while Yamamoto tried to converse from the other side of his locked door)
I really love this line because it says a lot about both of their characters. ♥♥♥

a small bottle of...something, but I'm not quite sure what that is.
sounds like denial

"You sure do get around a lot. No wonder you have the large box."
hahaha, This fic makes me so happy ♥

that he was often out and having sex with other women.
This is the first time I noticed this and made me laugh so hard.

Yamamoto nearly died; he swore his heart stopped for what felt like nearly an hour.I dunno, I half want to say 80 would ( ... )

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binni June 18 2008, 04:28:57 UTC
0__0 You put it in your memories?!! ;_; I...I feel so honoured!! THANK YOU!! *hug*

Thank you for your opinions and thoughts throughout the piece!! I appreciate it soooo much~!!!

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thisistony June 18 2008, 04:31:44 UTC
Hahahahahhahahahah ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

It started the KHR section of my memories. I renamed it "IS THAT WHAT THAT BOTTLE IS"

Hahaha, then I can go back and do commentary on the others, lol. Since they were older!Fic, I was like "...Ehhh, maybe not..."

WRITE MORE BB, THAT'S ALL I ASK ♥♥♥♥

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LOLZ EPIC FTW~<3 tempestamorte November 19 2008, 18:42:22 UTC
Ah man this was soooo entertaining to read 8D ok cause imma slow the bottle is lube? lolz

Its really nice the interaction they have. It seems pretty natural and very interesting. That just made me laugh when Dera was changing the angle of the makeout pic but it was still make out between him and yama. lolz pedophile...tyl80 and 59 would have been kinda hot but need to respect it XD

ok I could go on and on and how I loved it 8D so i shall stop blabbing. 030

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Re: LOLZ EPIC FTW~<3 binni November 20 2008, 22:20:24 UTC
Yes, the bottle is indeed lube <^^

I'm glad you think it flows! And this is about as pedophilic as I can really get without purchasing my one-way ticket to Hell. (I mean, I played pokemon, and read Harry Potter, so I'm already going, but... the morality issue >.>;;)

But, thank you very much!!

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