Ich Kann es Nicht Wieder Gut Machen

Aug 22, 2008 13:10

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Pairing: TYL!5980 (I swear. DX)
Rating: PG (pushing PG-13)
Word Count:  1,360
Worksafe: Yes
Warnings: Yaman's being assertive. =o
Author's Note: This was one was also part of the prompt and fic-bit exchange with Tony (ravenlock_3), but she said to post this one separately, so... I am.

Tell me what you mean! And tell me what you meant when you left! You were the one always calling me an idiot, or a moron, so please: Enlighten me and tell me what I don't know. )

pairing: tyl!5980, rating: pg, fandom: khr

Leave a comment

Comments 24

labymiro August 22 2008, 17:51:34 UTC
Still looks like 8059 to me but then I don't see Hayato being seme unless he's with Tsuna so probably I'm biased XD And... it was a different side of Yamamoto, losing his temper like that, but then I guess he is capabale of it. Though I'm a little saddened that it wasn't exactly all happy, lovey-dovey ending, I'm glad of it too. It's more realistic.

Reply

cliched_words August 22 2008, 17:55:53 UTC
Augh omg~ I know. DX I tried so hard to make it seem 5980, yet... *headdesk* Not so much...! ^^;;

I love happy endings, but so many 8059 fics have them and I'm also a lover of drama and angst, so... *shot* Yay ending...? =D;;

Ah! Forgive my lack of an intelligent response--I didn't get much sleep. Pillow~~~T_T

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

binni August 22 2008, 21:29:41 UTC
yay angry!mocchan love~!! ♥

xD I was going for semexuke, but it definitely turned out more 8059 than 5980 ^^;;

THE RACCOON TAIL WAS TOTALLY RANDOM AND JUST THROWN IN. xD

And--and--thank you, Senpai--!! >.

Reply


galeaya August 22 2008, 19:55:15 UTC
-sigh- forgiveness isn't easy to give. ^^,

Excellent fic. I liked the way you portrayed them as couple. Though, of course, happy endings are nice. But this ending really suited the purpose, so it still fits.

^^,

Thanks for the fic~

Reply

binni August 22 2008, 21:32:20 UTC
*shakes head* No, not at all. ;-;

Thank you very much--! And--I'm sure Yaman will forgive him soon...! Just... not right away.... ;_; He was pretty hurt. >.>

Reply


thisistony August 22 2008, 20:56:02 UTC
YOU DIDN'T WAIT AND LET ME GET FIRST COMMENT. I FEEL SO BETRAYED.

I love this one ;~; You know how broken!OTP get to me and Yaman is so perfect, especially at the end where he has to fight off his forgiving nature ;~~;

Reply

binni August 22 2008, 21:34:39 UTC
I'M SORRY I WASN'T SURE HOW MUCH TIME I'D HAVE SO I POSTED IT AS SOON AS I COULD FORGIVE MEEEEEE!!

Fellow broken!OTP lovers unite! *dorky fist pump of faggotry*

And Yaman wants to make sure that Gokkyun realizes how much he hurt him, even though he does know and then Yaman won't know asldkfajsdlkfjasdlgkja *headdesk*

*/died*

Reply

thisistony August 22 2008, 21:36:13 UTC
I KNOW. IT'S SO PERFECT AND SO THEM AND ;~;

OTL.

Reply

binni August 22 2008, 21:38:19 UTC
I KNOW, RIGHT?? *cling*

Reply


alienashi August 22 2008, 21:15:04 UTC
Love it because I love to read couples breaking up <3

No, really. Most of the time, the unrealisticness and the OOC-ness comes from portayals of breakups/arguments.

Great job <3

Reply

binni August 22 2008, 21:37:13 UTC
There's more of us! I thought we were a rare breed...! XD; *shot*

I know they're just manga characters, but putting in a little bit of reality doesn't hurt~ =)

And thank you so much...! >.

Reply

alienashi August 22 2008, 21:57:16 UTC
We aren't rare breeds *yells at people who think we are*

Thank YOU so much, for putting so much effort in spreading the canon 8059 lurvvvvvvvveeeeeeee! <3333

Reply

binni August 24 2008, 19:50:03 UTC
xD I do what I can!!

(We just need more 5980 >.>)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up