collage essay for english.

Sep 22, 2005 21:24

i need to wake up ( Read more... )

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kcappieg September 22 2005, 20:38:01 UTC
I liked it.

Were all the spelling errors on purpose? Probably not, upon thinking about it...
Oh well...I still liked it.

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yuenmei September 23 2005, 07:37:47 UTC
grammar Anna, grammar!

It's a good idea, just needs to be cleaned up. Let me know if you want someone to edit it.

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kurt_a_hilomid September 23 2005, 11:56:56 UTC
I'd have to agree with the both of them. I thought it was really good, but you definetly need to run through it for grammer and spelling, but other than that, it's awesome.

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kurt_a_hilomid September 23 2005, 14:29:24 UTC
haha, i just had my friend edit some of it.
im so bad with grammer it's crazy.

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anonymous September 23 2005, 14:41:48 UTC
awsome i loved it good detail

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shatteredhalo94 September 25 2005, 20:29:28 UTC
very much *you* anna lol witty and interesting. only you could make waking up seem captivating lol good job

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