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[clockstopper]

Title: Subtleties
Word Count: 1328
Rating: PG
Summary: They make it obvious with the not touching
Warnings/Spoilers: Carson and Elizabeth are around so no spoilers
Author's Notes: Told from Jack's POV. I've wanted to do this for a long time.

Comments

[rilestar]

Haha! Jack's absolutely right - WE ALL NOTICED, TOO!

I'm so glad you've taken on this challenge!

[clockstopper]

I'm glad to have taken it on. I'm really stretching my writing style here.

Ha, we all have noticed and OF COURSE Jack noticed. He's kind of in the same boat.

[lenyia]

That was sweet. I like Jack's POV and his "Just... touch."

[clockstopper]

Jack is my favorite. Like really. Like he beats Rodney and Lorne, but just barely. It's like Jack Rodney Lorne Carson John and they're all like right on top of each other, but Jack is first.

I just feel really comfortable writing him and I don't know why.

[cambion_ichor]

This was sweet; I liked Jack's POV.
And Jack would know all about falling for a scientist wouldn't he?
Cute!

[clockstopper]

I made hints. There were hints, but I didn't outright say... okay only just a little. I figure Jack wouldn't about how he loves Daniel if he's thinking about John and Rodney and their silliness.

Thanks for reading!

Subtleties

[velocitygrass]

Very enjoyable. Loved Jack's POV and his assessment of John and Rodney and especially this:

“Just… touch.”

Re: Subtleties

[clockstopper]

Jack is awesome. I love him and I've been wanting to do this story for awhile, but I just could never find the time.

Thanks for reading!

[rinsbane]

I love Jack's POV. And I really love his identification-not identification with John, because I can totally see it working like that.

[clockstopper]

I see some Jack in John, but he's such his own person that it's totally different. But I can also see Jack maybe saying, hey he's kind of like me, but not really.

Thanks for reading.