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[clockstopper]

So, um, I really wanted the first fic I posted here to be a fanfic, but I figured I might as well start posting my NaNo because I'm writing it and I have no feedback on it. So if you're interested... here's a bit of the Prologue.

The as of yet untitled NaNoWriMo '07 fic by Clockstopper
R/eventual NC-17ness (maybe)
Warnings: Violence, possible gay

Comments

[i_luv_trees]

Very intriging start, doll! I'm assuming you won't mind a little beta advice, if so let me know

[clockstopper]

Ha, no, it's good, please. Feel free to tell me anything.

The thing with the POV is that you're right, it was sort of stylistic. You'll see with the rest that it's got the same disjointed feel to it that I'm hoping reads through. You're supposed to be confused. You're supposed to wonder who's talking at what time and when. So for me, your confusion is a good thing... unless you really didn't understand it. It may be too much, I don't know, but that's what this whole process is about.

Thanks for the beta notes. They'll be taken into consideration when NaNo is done because there's not beta-ing in NaNo... so I'm told.