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Dec 26, 2007 22:26

Title: Of Stories Never Told
Word Count: 1174
Rating: PG-13 for sexual references
Summary: It’s not exactly a love story, but that doesn’t mean love isn’t involved.
Warings/Spoilers: Vagueish stuff for season five.
Author's Notes: Lorne POV... You know Lorne of the Deathwok Clan... That Lorne. Also, this is the weirdest writing style ever. It's in ( Read more... )

spike/angel, ats

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clockstopper December 27 2007, 20:19:50 UTC

I had thought about that, the break thing, but then I wasn't sure if it wouldn't make it feel even more disjointed so I left it that way because then it shifts back into first person seemlessly so I was like okay, I'll leave it. But thanks for the input. I'll try and rework for next time I do something like this.

I've wanted to do Lorne telling his audience about Spike/Angel for awhile... ever since I saw that one episode during the Connor drama.

dragontatt December 27 2007, 14:44:01 UTC

Liked this a lot. ;)

clockstopper December 27 2007, 20:20:07 UTC

Eek! Thanks sweetie!

zoesmith December 27 2007, 18:32:41 UTC

Wow, what a great description of their relationship! You did a really wonderful job! And I love the way you told their story, through Lorne’s nice! Very interesting and original.
Really loved it. Thank you for sharing! :)

Happy holidays!

clockstopper December 27 2007, 20:21:11 UTC

There's is a bittersweet not really love, but really freaking close relationship to me. Not hearts and flowers, but still probably better because of it.

Thank you for reading and happy holidays to you!

darkspace99 December 27 2007, 19:21:16 UTC

I could so see this happening. Of course Lorne would pick up on the subtext! And seeing as he may be the only one alive after NFA, of course he would tell their story to other people. It's just so Lorne and the story is so beautiful. It captures their relationship so well.

Great job!

clockstopper December 27 2007, 20:24:06 UTC

He does see things after all.

I like to think they lived, but I don't like to go into it further than that.

Thank you for your nice words. Really, they're making me blush over here.

amavel_bel December 27 2007, 19:33:39 UTC

Great fic. Loved how Lorne described their relationship. Bravo!!!

clockstopper December 27 2007, 20:25:36 UTC

Your icon makes me smile. The dolls never really look like them, but the Angel one kind of does look like David... the Spike one is freaky looking.

And thank you for reading!