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[clockstopper]

Title: The Numbers Game
Word Count: 3054
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Maybe he doesn't really need that two percent margin for error
Warnings/Spoilers: I don't know if there are any real spoilers for anything, but some vague stuff for season two. I mean I think we all know that Molly has two Daddies, but there's some... vague stuff. It's also oddly

Comments

[tiptoe39]

This is LOVE.

And so awesome. And how I would be TOTALLY OK with Mylar ending up.

Sigh. Why can't people give Matt the respect he deserves/the respect you give him in this? This is fuckin' GREAT.

Love you for this. Thanks so much for posting it. It makes me very happy.

[clockstopper]

Hehe, thanks.

I was drawn to the Mylar first, of course, but Matt and Mohinder... come on their like canon.

Matt is awesome and I love him and he will always been nothing but awesome in my fics.

Thanks for reading.

[clockstopper]

I see him as getting attached too easily and knowing this so he keeps his distance sometimes, but he's just so loveable and goof that it doesn't always work.

Thanks for reading!

[carma_baby]

I like how you managed to bring in all of the really complicated aspects of being in love, especially with someone you think is too good for you, and how it is hard to feel that that love isn't equal. And making that unequal love work is hard, because it gives one person... not exactly power over the other, but pretty close... and that is not healthy. Yet, you showed how Mohinder doesn't take advantage, and Matt does his best to not let it drive him crazy.

And I love that Mohinder had to get rid of the desk!

Thank you for sharing!

[clockstopper]

Oh exactly. Exactly! Matt's got issues and Mohinder's not even aware that there's those issues and it's really nobody's fault in this instance.

Of course. The desk could not be kept after that. I like to think they moved sometime when Molly turned 14 and had done enough whining and then Matt regrets it because he finds Molly making out with some guy at 16 and wishes for the smaller place... oh dear that will not get written.

Thanks for reading.

[tanisafan]

Oh my gosh, I love you not just a little bit for writing Sylar/Mohinder and Matt/Mohinder and making it work and fit and end in the best way possible. I have so much love for all three of these characters, but Matt in particular, and you've got his voice down to a pat.

Oh, and I really like that it's vaguely incoherent and abstract at times, it works wonderfully with the whole mindreading thing. Excellent stuff!

(And just because I'm me: I love how Nathan gets the best line in the story *g*.)

[clockstopper]

Yay! I'm loved not just a little bit! Yes, end, but you know Sylar is probably not amused by the ending. He'll just have to find love somewhere else... not with Maya though. Definitely not with Maya.

And YAY! I was afraid my Matt voice sounded a little too... Joss-esque?... does it or am I tripping.

Thank you for noticing that. At some points I was like maybe I'm going to far with that and then at others I was like I'm not going far enough.

(Which line? I think all of Nathan's lines are awesome)

[tanisafan]

Hehehe! I thought the Sylar/Maya subtext was pretty hot. And then it got very boring. I wish they wouldn't do that *shakes fist*.

Matt is very snarky, so I'm guessing they sound similar in that respect? He sounds very much like Matt though, so I wouldn't worry ;).

I really loved Nathan telling Matt not to fuck it up, heh.

[crystal_mk]

Hmmm...what do I think of this? Oh yeah, I love it!!

I loved when Mohinder shot Sylar, best part.

[clockstopper]

Why thank you!

There was more I wanted to add, but it kind of felt finished there, so I did a little brackets thing and then finished it. Good place to end right?

[crystal_mk]

Don't worry about it, it was a lovely place to end.