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[clockstopper]

Title: Happy To Be Stuck With You
Word Count: 2617
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is how their first date goes
Warnings/Spoilers: Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang obviously. I hope everyone in America that hasn't had the chance to be pirates, has seen it now. Because really lovely episode.
Author's Notes: Written for el_gilliath's bday, which granted was almost exactly two

Comments

[natn2208]

Oh, this put a giant grin on my face! Now my mum's asking me what the heck I'm doing on the computer to make me smile like that.
Absolutely loved it!

[clockstopper]

Ah, thank you so much for your lovely words and for reading.

[becky_monster]

(here via sg1_debrief)

Two minor nitpicks that threw me right out of the story I'm sorry to say.
- In the UK, a 'storage closet' is a 'storage cupboard' or just a 'cupboard'.

Also - it's not a 'movie theatre' it's either a 'cinema' or (if you're old fashioned;)) 'the pictures'.

If you need help with brit-picks then just holler or ask around for recommendations - any HP writers on your flist will know useful comms.

Sorry to be so picky but hope it helps!

[clockstopper]

Nitpicks are fine and while I'll stipulate to the first point, I'll argue the second. Jack says movie theater. Jack has a more American feel, obviously says American things and I did go back and forth with cinema and movie theater. But that's my view. everyone can have different ones.

Ha, not sure I actually have HP writers on my flist, but I do have people who live in those places. Maybe next time I'll keep it in mind.

[jo19844_twfic]

oH BRILLIANT!!

wonderful take on a first Torchwood date,

loved it

[clockstopper]

If only, right. Hopefully it ends up brilliant because I'll be sad if it doesn't. I'm really looking forward to the 5th episode. It sounds kind of awesome.

[bacchae777]

Very nice.....Thanks for sharing

[clockstopper]

No problem.

I like the words in your icon because they're so very true.

[charharkness]

So sweet :)

I can imagine a much shorter version of this on the show.

[clockstopper]

I want to see it. I very much want to see the date in the show. Very much so.

Thanks for reading.