Wow, rough style. I like it. Slowly but surely Greg got to me just as he got to Nick. The way you wrote it, felt like some of his thoughts were said out loud: I could picture him muttering aloud at his own place, cursing Nick for being so closed off. It was a bit of a painful process, because I hate it when one of them has doubts or is in denial. I'm glad Greg hung in there until Nick got it. Greg is so much smarter than him and me;)
Oh Archie! I totally believe him being oblivious. And Mandy's logic makes sense to me :-D
Now I'm trying to figure out what Panic songs made you write this. What do you mean 'moodier'? From where I'm sitting all their songs are made of rainbows and puppies. Oh wait. I may have been distracted there. *g*
It is rough, mostly because I wrote it in less than an hour, but also I'm trying that style out. Minimal dialogue with some in the prose. It seems to be working out. This was all pretty stream of consciousness and of course it was going to work out, even though sometimes I really wonder. That's the canon though.
yes, poor Archie. He caught on though. After Greg had to tell him out right.
I was listening to Fever. Those ones always seem a bit more... angsty to me. Not that I don't love panic with like a love I had never know before, but Fever has a lot of deep songs on it. I said moodier because that's how me and one of my friends describe little Ryan Ross (bless him and all his fashion trends.)
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It was a bit of a painful process, because I hate it when one of them has doubts or is in denial. I'm glad Greg hung in there until Nick got it. Greg is so much smarter than him and me;)
Oh Archie! I totally believe him being oblivious. And Mandy's logic makes sense to me :-D
Now I'm trying to figure out what Panic songs made you write this. What do you mean 'moodier'? From where I'm sitting all their songs are made of rainbows and puppies. Oh wait. I may have been distracted there. *g*
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yes, poor Archie. He caught on though. After Greg had to tell him out right.
I was listening to Fever. Those ones always seem a bit more... angsty to me. Not that I don't love panic with like a love I had never know before, but Fever has a lot of deep songs on it. I said moodier because that's how me and one of my friends describe little Ryan Ross (bless him and all his fashion trends.)
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