Six Four

[clocksheep]

Hetalia fanfic for the anniversary of the Tiananmen Square massacre.

Comments

[min19]

I think the fic works well without the arus imho. It's a serious fic and I feel like the arus would kind of ruin the mood. D8
But it's your choice in the end. Either way, the message gets across. :D

The conflicting feelings are well-executed in this fic. I definitely like how China is shown as neither blatantly at fault or blatantly at right, and how in the end he does care a lot about his citizens. The last part with the little girl really got me fdjafkaribnaeibaawwww i really have to stop getting so emotional over fics ;n; *sniff*

Anyways, I actually don't know much about this incident. But you wrote this very well, and I think I understand a bit more clearly what happened that day. Once again, great job on your part. :D

[clocksheep]

I edited the first part with the 'aru's in and it sounds ridiculous, so I think I'm just going to leave this as is. @_@

*Gives you tissues* I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and that China comes across as conflicted as I meant him to be. Thanks for reading! <3

[brother_aniki]

Wai~
I love it.

This is probably the first fic I've read that addresses the China-Hong Kong relationship so directly. I personally have to thank you for writing this.

[clocksheep]

No, thank you for reading! <3 I wanted Hong Kong to be in this because of the strain the massacre had on the relationship between the two. I'm glad you like the fic! :)

[sppandaaa]

Very well done~
I loved it a lot. I don't know why I like insecure China as much as I do. XD

[clocksheep]

Thanks for reading! ♥ Same here, I guess because he's usually portrayed as the mature and stable one. But I think he probably has a lot of problems. ;____;

[pomgrenadier]

I don't like the arus, I like your fic the way it is.

uuughhhh I actually teared up with the last 2 paragraphs, whaaat I never get emotional when reading fics! ;; It's a sensitive topic, thanks for writing this. ♥

[clocksheep]

Great, I'll just leave this as is. ^^

*hugs* ;_; It's especially easy for me to get emotional during fic about dark historical events because then I'm thinking about the history too and it's like aaaaaaaahhh ;___;

Thanks for reading! <3

[ohdeko]

holy shit I'm crying

oh my god

thank you so much for this <3

edit: woah I just read the small text at the bottom. You wrote this when you were sick?! You are amazing. Are you feeling better?

[clocksheep]

*Gives you tissues too* ;___; Thank you for reading! :)

Haha yeah and it was messing with my head plus I normally spend more time on fics, so I was afraid this would make no sense and all the italics and back and forth dialogue and errghhh @__@; But I'm really glad people like it. <3

After sleep and medicine I'm feeling a bit better, yes. Thanks for asking! ♥

[ohdeko]

I think it reads fine! I don't usually read fics (anything over 300 words is daunting for me fff), but I found this piece relatively easy to follow :)

Hope you get well soon!