Last Firebender

Jun 24, 2010 18:05

I just committed to rewriting all of chapter 17 for Last Firebender ( Read more... )

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clockwerkchaos June 25 2010, 16:22:52 UTC
It was needed. There is a reason this chapter has been going so slow.The original sucked. And I had basically commuted myself to. “It's going to suck, let’s get this over with and try to reduce the suckage as much as possible. The new one manages the same end result without OOC charecters, useless tangents and other problems.

Heck it even jumps the story ahead. Though it does mean that some stuff from the last few becomes a “abandon the shaggy dog”.

PS: Speaking of which, the original pseudo historical document is no longer needed. So if you like to suggest a topic you’d like to hear more about I really have no plans for this one. (or Icould go with the one I already have, which is about the effect of getting drunk on benders)

PPS: Benders going on a bender.

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clockwerkchaos June 25 2010, 17:43:33 UTC
Honestly, I don't know. I never decided on that. Which probably answers how important they are to the plot.

Less Honest, but more fun answers.

1.Aang never married, he was too busy with Bumi.
2.Aang never married he was too busy with a weird love/hate thing/fling with Azulon.
3.Aang never married, he was too busy with Pakku.
4.Ty Lee is secretly his descendant.
5.Mai is secretly his descendant.
6.Azula is secretly his descendant.
7.Jamyang is his grandson/son.
8.The Blue spirit is his son/grandson.
9.All of the above are true. Aang really got around.

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