What do you think?

[clockworkboho]

Comments

[kurosau]

How does it look in business card size? Because I can imagine it might be hard to make out the title since your stroke perfectly matches the background gradient.

[clockworkboho]

Not sure what you means? but its readable when I size it down in photoshop!

Haven't got them to the printers yet.

[kurosau]

Oh, I meant the thick line around the title characters. Usually it would help differentiate them from the background but it looks like it helps them blend in. But if it looks fine when sized down in photoshop, my guess is wrong.

[clockworkboho]

Oh, now I understand what you meant. Yeah, the contrast of the white on red keeps the letters readable, thanks though!

[dewline]

This could work.

[aphroditeishot]

Well, I'm not one for orange, but I do like this if that means anything. :)

[lessthanuseful]

It's very striking. It's good!

[opiumgaze]

As I've mentioned, I think it's fabulous. :)