seven scars of a life well fought

[clouberding]

rating: teenz
characters/pairings: sarah & sara
summary: scar (noun): a mark left by healing of injured tissue

Comments

[slybrunette]

I really want to flail more over the headers but I think you think that I'm crazy, so I'll restrain myself. Except to say that heart; not visible, unsure how severe; source unknown is the most devastating thing you've ever made me read, and you regularly make me read a fic about a dying cancer patient and the people who love her, so that's saying something.

Your fight scenes, man. Always so rich and vividly detailed, which is probably because you have better than average knowledge of how that shit works, and man does that pay off here. It's nice not having to stop and frown and try to imagine if what you're saying is at all feasible. One and five are my favorite sections out of this, one probably because the total ridiculousness of it combined with your talent with fights, and five because straight up banter is the way to my heart. Which is not to say there aren't a ton of stand out lines elsewhere, as for instance:

It doesn’t click until after she’s fully healed and they’re back home again, when Sarah suggests taking the day off