Two Week Stay-cation // (Logan, Veronica, ensemble) PG

[cloud_forest]

Title: Two Week Stay-cation -+- Chapter Two of  --?--
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[havemy_heart]

This is a cute chapter. I loved Veronica tormenting Logan simply by waking him up :) And Naked!Logan!Abs! Yum!

I felt uncomfortable for her every time Veronica had to talk to Aaron *shudders* What does Lilly see in him? Can't she see how creepy he is?

I can't wait for more L/V goodness :)

[cloud_forest]

Yum, indeed! What a delicious morning snack, wouldn't you say? lol...

Yeah, Aaron is a major creepazoid. Famous dude or not, he's got some serious shadowiness about him that would make me shudder any time he came within a certain radius of me. Like Spidey Sense, haha.

Glad you're enjoying the L/V fun so far... more is on its way soon, I hope ;)

[love_is_epic]

I am not patient. I totally wanted Veronica just to run and jump in bed with him, finding him nekkid... and then.. well you know : ) Hee!

Seriously, though, I love the little things going on in this fic. And although you didn't say anything, I can kind of feel Lilly's annoyance. I don't think she's too happy about the situation - she might be afraid of what will happen.

I'm looking forward to more!

[cloud_forest]

Muahahaha.... you are an evil one. I know how you feel though. You just wanna walk up to Veronica and be like, "look! Delicious delicious boy meat! Dig in already!". Unfortunately, pre-S1 Veronica would not be that bold, and alas we must wait, lol.

Hehe, it's the little things that I love in fic, too. Just tiny, subtle little events that help show the tides are changing.

More to come, I assure you ;)

Glad you're liking it so far!

[love_is_epic]

You just wanna walk up to Veronica and be like, "look! Delicious delicious boy meat! Dig in already!".

^ Yes! That's it exactly! *sigh* Is it too much to ask that in real life we could have had innocent Veronica mixed with bold/hot for Logan Veronica?

The buildup is what's always makes the ending worth it, though : )

[cloud_forest]

Hahaha. Yes, yes it is too much to ask. In fact, it was too much to ask for Logan and Veronica to be together at ALL, apparently. *glares at S3*

I couldn't agree with you more about buildup though. When I read fanfic I'm always thinking "get to the sexin!" in the back of my mind, but would be lying if I didn't admit the cute stuff beforehand is just as enjoyable in its own way ;)

[pegm81484]

I like how you're setting up this story. I'm very interested in seeing how the whole Aaron, Lilly, Logan, and Veronica storylines play out.

Plus, who can resist his abs? Or back... see icon!

[cloud_forest]

Mmm... I (and everyone else here, I'm sure) send you my deepest gratitude for using that icon, lol.

More topless Logan, I say! ;)

[spygrrl76]

Great update! I love Veronica beginning to see Logan in sexual way. So cute their interaction in this chapter. I just love it! Well written Lilly as well. You captured her voice perfectly.

[cloud_forest]

Hehe, thank ya! Glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank you also for your compliments about how I wrote Lilly. I don't often write for her in my fics, so I don't get a lot of practise with it... so it's encouraging to hear that she's believable here.

Thanks again :D

[autumn0000]

YAY! new chapter :)
I LOVED IT! ♥
I can't wait for the next chapter

[cloud_forest]

Hehe! Thanks!! ;)

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon *crosses fingers*