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Two Week Stay-cation // (Logan, Veronica) PG

Sep 11, 2009 00:56

Title: Two Week Stay-cation -+- Chapter Four of --?-
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celtic_flicka October 11 2009, 21:02:25 UTC

I loved the part where Logan faked an injury so he could throw her in the water--that was a really well-written sequence.

cloud_forest October 12 2009, 03:31:09 UTC

Hehe, thank you. I can't believe Veronica didn't see that coming. What a silly girl. Although, since it led to all the wonderful pool wrestling, I'm sure we can forgive her ;)

Glad you're enjoying it, and as always, thank you for your wonderful feedback :)

kobewife1 October 12 2009, 04:34:26 UTC

I loved this chapter. I was so cute!

cloud_forest October 12 2009, 20:14:17 UTC

Hee, thanks very much. Glad you enjoyed the pool fun ;)

afrocurl October 12 2009, 06:36:04 UTC

Ah, the moment of understanding what exactly is going on--I didn't expect it that soon, but I can't say I'm unhappy with the result.

The pool scene worked so well to get at how these two can play off each other and then realize it's something different only in a fraction of that time.

cloud_forest October 12 2009, 20:20:02 UTC

LoL, yeah... I'm thinking the uber closeness and lack of clothing may have had something to do with it ;)

You're right though... The seeds of crush-dom have DEFINITELY been planted. Or perhaps this was the germination phase. Maybe even sprouting.

Er, sorry... I'll stop with the plant metaphor, hehe. Anyhoo, very happy you're enjoying it.

Thanks!! :D

fromthebrain October 12 2009, 23:44:27 UTC

I just read all the chapters and I have to say that I am loving this story. I am a sucker for all pre-series LoVe AUs and this is one of the best that I have read.

I love your description of Logan and reading i could picture that sexy body. I loved the whole fight in the water too because I could see Logan and Veronica doing that.

I can't wait for your next update!

cloud_forest October 13 2009, 02:50:39 UTC

Wow, I don't even know what to say. You just blew my mind with flattery :D ;)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. And, I know what you mean about pre-series LoVe fics... I'm a total sucker for them too, lol!

But yes, I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying it so much, and can't wait to hear what you think of future chapters :D

Thanks again! You're too kind!

spygrrl76 October 17 2009, 05:51:50 UTC

Excellent chapter! I love how seemlessly you shifted from playful, cute Logan and Veronica to steamy, filled with UST Logan & Veronica. So hot! Definitely can't wait for more!

cloud_forest October 17 2009, 19:31:07 UTC

Hehehe... the first time I read your comment, I thought that when you wrote 'UST', you meant 'LUST', and had just forgotten the 'L', hahaha. *bonks self on head*

In any case, I'm glad the transition played out well, and that it was so enjoyable ;)

Thanks very much, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter (to be posted soon, I hope! ;) hehe)

spygrrl76 October 17 2009, 21:31:30 UTC

"Lust" would have worked too! :) There was just sexiness to be had. ;)