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cloud_forest

Two Week Stay-cation // (Logan, Veronica) PG-13

Oct 26, 2009 22:39

( Two Week Stay-cation ~|~ Conclusion of Chapter Six )

two week stay-cation

Comments 25

madeinmel November 6 2009, 05:50:09 UTC

Squee!! Just lovely...

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 02:44:04 UTC

Hehe, I'm happy to see that the consensus so far DOES appear to be 'squee!'.

Thank you :)

spygrrl76 November 6 2009, 05:52:46 UTC

"squee" to the infinity! :) so cute and sweet...awwww. i love this logan and veronica. that was a perfect culmination to the tension that has been brewing between them!!

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 02:45:37 UTC

Hehe! To the INFINITY?! I feel so special! So loved! Thank you!

I know, I love them too! I mean, S1-3 Veronica with her sharp wit and ass-kicking attitude was all kinds of awesome, but sweet/innocent/trusting Veronica can be just as fun ;)

I'm happy happy happy that you like it... thank you for your comments!

havemy_heart November 6 2009, 17:43:07 UTC

Definitely squee! :D I'm so excited that Logan finally kissed her! And she reciprocated! \o/

I love the language you use, so descriptive and easy to imagine.

I can't wait to see what happens next :)

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 02:49:36 UTC

Your comment? Just made me go squee! ;)

I know eh... like, it's about time, Logan! What TOOK you so long? Geez!

I'm not sure why, but a couple of other people have commented on my language/descriptions for this chapter, and it really means a lot to me to hear that. Sometimes when I'm agonizing for (literally) a half hour over one sentence or paragraph, I worry that I'm being too anal... or, I worry that my language is a little too, I don't know... flowery? Sometimes I just feel like it doesn't flow very well...

Hard to describe, but the point is, I'm all kinds of happy that you (and other readers, apparently) like/love/enjoy it. Definitely the kind of encouragement a writer likes to hear :)

So for that, and everything else, thank you!! :D

havemy_heart November 7 2009, 02:59:24 UTC

As someone who just wrote a ficlet and is trying to write more often, I appreciate how hard word usage can be sometimes. You want to be descriptive without it being purple prose. I think you do a great job of staying on this side of that line :)

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 05:22:06 UTC

Hehe, well thank you again :)

P.S. your icon? Pure love.

scarlett2u November 7 2009, 06:19:57 UTC

Whoa, this may have been the sexiest "above the neck" story I've ever read. You did an amazing job with your "word pictures" creating the magic of the first kiss in general and the chemistry between these two characters in particular. Since you've left me too breathless to squee, I'm going to with that Keanu Reeves (and Logan!) classic: WHOA! (Hope that's okay?)

P.S. Post chapter 7 soon, pretty please?

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 15:50:50 UTC

Wow... I don't know what else to say except, thank you! I don't know what I did to deserve such wonderful, wonderful feedback from people like you :D

I'm just ecstatic right now (in response to your feedback)... So glad you're finding it kinda sexy (seeing as how it HAS all been 'above the neck', hehe), and really happy you enjoy the imagery.

Also, I THINK I can allow you to use the Keanu Reeves/Logan classic rather than a squee. THIS time. Hehehe ;)

Chapter seven will be coming VERY soon, I hope! Thanks for your enthusiasm :D

miss_v_mars November 7 2009, 06:50:52 UTC

That was full of awesome-ness.
Next chapter soon, pretty plz with cherries on top :)

cloud_forest November 7 2009, 15:52:29 UTC

Haha, great! I'm glad you found awesomeness in it ;)

Whoa now... there are cherries in the bribery mix? Now I have to post the next chapter soon! I shall try my very very best, I promise ;D

Thanks!!