Two Week Stay-cation // (Logan, Veronica) PG

[cloud_forest]

Comments

[note_sarcasm]

i really liked this episode.
and i really liked lilly!!!

[cloud_forest]

Hehe! Just before I got to the bottom/your comment I thought to myself 'I hope she likes the way I wrote Lilly', and lo and behold... you do! Hehe.

As with Chapter Six (and all the ones before it), I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!! :D

[havemy_heart]

I love that Logan cooked for her! Thank you, because so many authors write him as not being able to cook, and we saw in 2x22 that he can. And the kissing was yummy :)

I'm not afraid that Lilly's reaction was too mild, but I am afraid that she made it sound like all Logan could possibly want from Veronica is sex. I don't want V to be scared away by that :(

[cloud_forest]

Hee! I'm glad you liked the Logan cooking part. So for that, you're very welcome. ;)

You're absolutely right. Lilly's reaction wasn't very supportive/helpful to Veronica's mindset. Poor girl. As if she wasn't already confused enough!

So happy you're enjoying it. Just one chapter to go!!

[celtic_flicka]

I really liked Lilly and Veronica's conversation--I think a lot of writers turn Lilly into a raving bitch-monster, and I disagree with that. I think Lilly really did care a lot about Veronica, so the way you wrote this makes a lot of sense to me. At the same time, I like that Lilly may not have quote gotten things right, with her comments about Logan and sex, since that could very well be how Lilly sees things.

Also, Lilly's line about borrowing the sweater cracked me up.

[cloud_forest]

I can't tell you how happy it makes me that you enjoyed Lilly and Veronica's conversation. I struggled a lot with figuring out exactly how Lilly would react to the news that there was some sparkage between Veronica and Logan.

To me, it seemed like it would be a very complex reaction. You'd have Lilly wanting to be supportive of Veronica's possible new relationship, but also wanting to protect her from/caution her against how she percieves Logan (ie. very best friend-like). Then again, she'd no doubt be wrestling with some jealousy, too... so yeah. Just a bunch of warring emotions all rolled up into a ball, and this is what came out. So again, I'm glad that it was believable to you :D

[afrocurl]

Logan's all helpful in the kitchen. Good to know, here. ;)

I really liked all of this, from the brunch scene to Lilly's reaction (though, there's something nagging at me that point, I mean, I imagine something with Donut being less than thrilled or Lilly doing something less than sane.)

But, I'm happy to see this after such a long wait between chapters and I hope that the last one is already well in the works.

[cloud_forest]

Hehe, indeed he is! Oh, if only we could all have a breakfast-cooking Logan every morning *wistful sigh*.

Yeah, it has been a long wait. I feel terrible, lol. Alas, real life is a total jerkface that doesn't understand TEH FANFIC. Don't you worry though. The last one is gonna be up very, VERY soon :D

Thanks for reading and your always-wonderful comments!

[p2880]

I like that it's clear Lily is really over Logan. I think she was right to warn V about Logan and sex. I mean, really!

[cloud_forest]

Hehe, well, actually, she's not REALLY over him yet. There will be a bit more to come on that issue ;)

But yeah. That's just Lilly. Looking out for her bestest pal ;)