bandombigbang2012 Red is the Rose, Brendon/Spencer, R, Part 2

[cloudlessclimes]

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[restless_jedi]

I was wondering if this was an error?

When he can speak again Spencer says, “Samhain? But that's less than a fortnight away in the Summer Lands!” Spencer stands, then sits, then stands again. The Elves give him a look of pity, whether in sympathy for the truth Spencer’s just learned, or for the fact that he still keeps track of the passage of time in the human world, Spencer can’t say. “I will not offer myself up on a plate to some sidhemo chroí, it's all right,” Spencer rests his cheek atop Brendon's head and makes soothing, quieting noises, holding him tight. Very gently, Spencer strokes the tip of his forefinger under Brendon's chin, tilting his head up so he can meet his eyes. “What is it? Are you hurt? Did something frighten you?” Spencer's concerned darkened eyes flit from studying Brendon's face to searching the darkness beyond the safe pool of light cast by the rose bush.It feels like two paragraphs fused that don't quite belong together

[cloudlessclimes]

oh. crap. you're right. you're also the first person to point this out to me. i'm sorry. i'll have a look and see what on earth happened and how to fix it.

[restless_jedi]

No worries! We've all had posting issues one time or another. I'm really enjoying it so far!

[cloudlessclimes]

it ate 6 paragraphs because it didn't like a tonal marker in an Irish word. oops. thank you for pointing that out and I hope you keep reading? <3