i like that this part was written in jjong's pov cos it gives us more glimpse of how their relationship was besides the one-sided sex. uhm while reading the first one it kinda gave me an impression that kibum really liked jjong but jjong didn't/couldn't feel the same. i mean, not just the sexual part of their set up but the romantic aspect as well.
through the first half of this, i still felt the same until i got to this line
“maybe stay the night?” he asks after a moment, because he knows kibum will want to. and he does like having him sleep next to him. it’s warm and comforting and nice.
in the first fic it seemed that jjong only said it for the lack of thing to say but in here you said it's cos he thought kibum wants to. uhm it wasn't really an improvement alone though cos it was something the jjong from the start would do but then you added that he also thought it was nice. it doesn't really count as a romantic feeling but.. it's something, i guess?
he always does everything for kibum’s sake, after all.that last line made this
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i'm late as hell responding to this, but i really wanted to. honestly i love comments like this. i love hearing feedback and getting a feel for what interpretations came out of my fics :3
i definitely was going for giving it a different kind of spin, and i wanted to emphasize that jonghyun does love key, he just can't express it sexually. so i'm glad that that came through for you.
i'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for taking the time to comment ♥
i'm going to try not to repeat the comment i left on your girlfriend's piece haha, but i truly did enjoy your story(ies). it's great to be able to get both perspectives. i get the sense here that jonghyun really does genuinely love kibum, but just in a different way than kibum loves him. i mean, he must, to extend himself in such a way that frankly kind of grosses him out, but still he does it to show kibum love in a way he understands, though jonghyun, himself, cannot.
loved the concept, exploring different facets of human emotion and relationships makes for the best fiction i think. great job! <3
i was definitely trying for a more romantic feel with jonghyun's perspective, and just kind of showing what he goes through to try and make things the way that key wants them, or ~normal. so i'm really glad it came through. and i'm glad you enjoyed it!!
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through the first half of this, i still felt the same until i got to this line
“maybe stay the night?” he asks after a moment, because he knows kibum will want to. and he does like having him sleep next to him. it’s warm and comforting and nice.
in the first fic it seemed that jjong only said it for the lack of thing to say but in here you said it's cos he thought kibum wants to. uhm it wasn't really an improvement alone though cos it was something the jjong from the start would do but then you added that he also thought it was nice. it doesn't really count as a romantic feeling but.. it's something, i guess?
he always does everything for kibum’s sake, after all.that last line made this ( ... )
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i definitely was going for giving it a different kind of spin, and i wanted to emphasize that jonghyun does love key, he just can't express it sexually. so i'm glad that that came through for you.
i'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for taking the time to comment ♥
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i definitely want to write more in this au, so maybe i will :3
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loved the concept, exploring different facets of human emotion and relationships makes for the best fiction i think. great job! <3
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i was definitely trying for a more romantic feel with jonghyun's perspective, and just kind of showing what he goes through to try and make things the way that key wants them, or ~normal. so i'm really glad it came through. and i'm glad you enjoyed it!!
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