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kibum412 April 28 2013, 03:53:17 UTC
this was really freakin interesting, and i can hear it practically BEGGING to be continued.... oh wait, that's me.
seriously, though, there's SO much about this verse i'm curious about. like what key feels when he wakes up, and what happens when jonghyun comes back. what happens between them then....

bravo, dear.

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cloudquake April 28 2013, 06:39:55 UTC
thank you so much for your comment! i agree that there's a lot to be elaborated on, and i have lots and lots of background information on both of them, so maybe i'll be able to get some more of that out in the future :3 i'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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g_odalisque13 April 28 2013, 06:06:23 UTC
this was so cool!
i mean, that's kind of a weird way to put it i guess. lol.
but i love afterlife fics and all the different ways that they can be handled. and this was definitely different from anything that i've read.
it almost combines the idea of an incubus with the concept of an afterlife and it's really intriguing!
loved it!

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cloudquake April 28 2013, 06:50:28 UTC
i'm glad you liked it bb! ♥

yeah, it's definitely different. not just straight up smut like what i usually post so that's also new for sure but i hope that i'll actually stick with making multiple parts for this one. i've had a lot of time and writing in other ways to develop this demon jonghyun and i really fucking love him and i want everyone else to see how great he is so hopefully i won't get lazy on this one :3

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mrsclaychoi April 28 2013, 07:08:10 UTC
so the 1st couple paragraphs im wondering "who is this perfect demon fucker,Key or Jonghyun?"ha.i was hopin jonghyun since jonghyun seems more fitting and hes just fucking SEXY AS FUCK SO WHY NOT.lol.you must agree cause it was jonghyun.lol ( ... )

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cloudquake April 28 2013, 07:22:54 UTC
thank you again for commenting bb ♥ and again i love it, sdkjklgjhf

i definitely agree, jonghyun is such a sexual person to me that it seems fitting for him to find himself in an afterlife where he literally has to live off of it. and the thought of him as a demon is just. so. perfect. as long as i don't get lazy i hope to have a lot more from this verse in the future, so i'm sure there will be at least a sequel :3

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kinkitup April 28 2013, 15:24:46 UTC
oh dear sweet heavens this was amazing and I'm spotting

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sakay May 2 2013, 05:26:14 UTC
I demand a sequel. Just saying ( ... )

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cloudquake May 2 2013, 07:47:58 UTC
fslkjd thank you so much for reading and for your comment! i'm so glad that you enjoyed it ♥

i love that you're so interested?? because honestly this au is one that i think about all the time and there's so much to be said if i can just find the energy and make myself get it out there in the way that i want it. i really like what you said about the pain; i didn't really think of that when i was writing it but with other details of his character it makes a lot of sense and it's really true.

skjgksjhf but hopefully i will write more parts to this story to satisfy some of your curiosity!!!!

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