I really loved this. Just perfect really :) so intimate but raw...so fragile but rough. it seems to be the perfect combination of opposites. I loved every part of this and how you managed to slow it down with an amazing description but still made it feel all too short and desperate.
thanks so much for writing and I look forward to your others :). xxxxx
thank you so much for reading and commenting! i'm glad that you enjoyed it c: i was worried that the dynamic was weird because it was unsteady but i'm glad to know that it didn't come off that way!! or at least not too much ♥
'it’s so much better and so much fucking worse when jonghyun starts letting out these little whimpers, bringing up one of his hands just to bite his palm and try to muffle them so the rest of the members won’t hear.' O_O. well damn.you know whats interestin about that line,its because we've seen him actually bite his hand on stage/shows before so its so vivid..well this shit is vivid either way.hahah.Jonghyun is sexy submissive.i don't like the idea of key topping jonghyun normally but this is just soo aheifhaeigheighrtuhguihhiiodhifhi FUCK.
it's kind of vague but as i was writing it i was thinking of kibum being upset with him for deciding to come back early? just kind of playing off of how he seemed so bitchy during the first night jonghyun came back for m countdown last week so i ran with it and thought of kibum being annoyed with him for pushing himself or something of that sort! i'm pretty sure this is the first time i've ever written bottom!jonghyun in a fic ... so it was really interesting for me, too!
i feel bad because it was originally supposed to be one of your prompts ... but sometimes writing does that to me fkjshfgkdjf. i promise i'm still working on them c: i have something else that's bouncing around in my head but hopefully i can get some more stuff out soon!!! ♥
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thanks so much for writing and I look forward to your others :). xxxxx
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'it’s so much better and so much fucking worse when jonghyun starts letting out these little whimpers, bringing up one of his hands just to bite his palm and try to muffle them so the rest of the members won’t hear.'
O_O. well damn.you know whats interestin about that line,its because we've seen him actually bite his hand on stage/shows before so its so vivid..well this shit is vivid either way.hahah.Jonghyun is sexy submissive.i don't like the idea of key topping jonghyun normally but this is just soo aheifhaeigheighrtuhguihhiiodhifhi FUCK.
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i feel bad because it was originally supposed to be one of your prompts ... but sometimes writing does that to me fkjshfgkdjf. i promise i'm still working on them c: i have something else that's bouncing around in my head but hopefully i can get some more stuff out soon!!! ♥
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