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When the Lights Begin to Fade (5/10).

Mar 01, 2011 23:45

Title: When the Lights Begin to Fade (5/10).
Author: cloudysky.
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia.
Pairing: Ben Barnes/William Moseley.
Rating: R.
Warnings: Real person slash.
Word count: 2,473.
Summary: What happens when the bright lights of fame begin to fade? What are you really left with? One minute you’re living in the lap of luxury, and the next, you’re ( Read more... )

fic: rpf, fic: ben/will, fanfic, fic: narnia

Comments 9

theweddingfairy March 2 2011, 19:31:24 UTC

Aw, they moved in together!
I loved this, it is so adorable!
But I feel so sorry for Will... his flat sounds awful.

This was great :)

TWF

cloudysky March 5 2011, 23:42:31 UTC

Well, his flat was never going to be pretty haha. But no, it's not really too good.

Thank you! :D

heidi_norsemyth March 2 2011, 21:39:48 UTC

Oooh, yay! That was a great update. They certainly don't waste any time, good for them. They could fix the place up maybe, amazing what some paint and new fabrics can do. Love these little domestic moments, not enough of them in this fandom. Kudos to you for writing such a nice story :)

cloudysky March 5 2011, 23:43:35 UTC

There will be definite fixing up later on in the fic lol. And thank you very much, I enjoy writing stuff like this.

lishalisha18 March 3 2011, 02:24:57 UTC

OMG. i was so busy studying for my midterms and when i saw this i light up like a flyer-fly. that sweet that they move in together.

cloudysky March 5 2011, 23:45:01 UTC

Haha hope it was a nice little distraction for you :)

nydoeclyastar March 3 2011, 18:18:02 UTC

Another wonderful chapter! Creepy neighbors scoping out Ben makes me smile!! I had to laugh out loud when I read that part of the story!! Please update soon....this is a lovely story, I love the little moments of domesticity between the two of them!! :)

cloudysky March 5 2011, 23:47:45 UTC

Thank you! :) I am here to entertain with ridiculous situations lol.

I'm hopefully going to update tomorrow. I planned to do it tonight, but I don't have the file with me as it's locked away at work on my netbook. Had to leave everything there thanks to a bomb scare. Most inconvenient!

Heart Warming asm613 October 2 2011, 22:58:00 UTC

I absolutely adore your versions of Will and Ben. Will is just too good to be true- we all want someone like that. It seems Ben is all he needs to be happy and Ben seems surprised that Will is happy with 'just' him_ and not the riches and fame and security that it can comfort one with. Ben's upbringing/family/past relations; making him feel that he was never enough?

Your dialogs come across as very natural and organic flowing- very realistic for the characters speaking them. You're able to convey the character's emotions in a way that makes me feel for them- they're layered and multi faceted- it's easy to imagine the settings/environment you place your characters in. I really enjoy watching these 2 characters come together. The more I read about them the more I want to read more about them- so I guess that means you're a good story teller- if you make your readers want more. If you can make your readers feel something. So thanks for sharing your story with us.