fic: narnia: Veracity
Title: Veracity
Prompt: WC50: rain, 027. Darkfic; I50: 030. Life
Summary: She wakes up from dreams crying and grasping for a little bottle, always just out of reach. A.U.
( On the good nights, someone is there: Mother or Susan, who pet her, or Peter, who understands. )
Prompt: WC50: rain, 027. Darkfic; I50: 030. Life
Summary: She wakes up from dreams crying and grasping for a little bottle, always just out of reach. A.U.
( On the good nights, someone is there: Mother or Susan, who pet her, or Peter, who understands. )
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Also, I'm liking this wonderful idea of AU Nurse!Lucy. It gives a girl ideas. And thus, you will be hearing back from me once I've acted on those ideas. which, of course, will not be involving AU!Peter and AU!Caspian. Not at all. Really.
Now, the story itself is totally awesome, like all your writing is, but I think it's one of my favourites because you captured how I thought Lucy must have felt, AU!Nurse or not. A little girl like her, having witnessed war and death, could not have slept well (if at all) knowing that she had the ability to save all of those people if only she had, had the chance. And making her a nurse was brilliant; the job fits Lucy perfectly. Plus there is some deep meaning other then the Pete/Lu stuff going on under the surface there, which is something I nearly never find in one-shots or fanfics that are a couple paragraphs, so well done ( ... )
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Aw, honey, thanks for the wonderful feedback! I was feeling rather useless, and majorly bored at work, then I opened up my email and found this! Made my whole week!! minus the actual watching of the movie, of course.
These ideas of yours? I think you need to be writing them. Right now. =D Even (especially) with the striked part.
PS, you taunting me or something? (re: comment title) =P
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