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FIC: ON THE ROAD 10

Oct 28, 2007 14:54

Title: On The Road 10
Author: Clubinthesky
Chapters: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 |
Rating: PG-13 angst
Pairing: Sylar/Maya
Spoilers: ( throughout 2x04 The Kindness of Strangers )
Summary: Doing bad things for good, is a good thing.. right?

The basement was dark, it was still night when they woke up tied against a pillar. Sylar tried to use ( Read more... )

Comments 8

dream_infinity0 October 28 2007, 21:27:01 UTC

loved it again like always.... can't wait for the next

albion1919 October 28 2007, 22:31:00 UTC

''I said don't cry!!'' He yelled out, leaned in kissing her fiercely with an almost need to comfort her, keeping her calm. She returned the kiss this time, this kiss was a long, desperate need for help and comfort.

Guh, HOT!!

Poor Maya, her mind is all over the place.

(what is "pols"?)

albion1919 October 28 2007, 22:38:03 UTC

albion1919 October 28 2007, 22:41:06 UTC

Ahh I see! Well I've learned a new word today, lol XD

The hotness was great. You really are good with the tension :)

albion1919 October 28 2007, 22:42:36 UTC

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loiskent2006 October 29 2007, 02:10:53 UTC

This chapter is as great and intense as always. And I really enjoy the hotness here! :D

I have a feeling that Maya is slowly walking into the dark side becasue she seems unable to distinguish the good and the bad anymore.
And it will only get worse in the following chapters I suppose. @-@

dana_serenity October 29 2007, 14:13:10 UTC

Oh no, Maya going bad?

'I said don't cry!!' he yelled out, leaned in kissing her fiercely with an almost need to comfort her, keeping her calm.

That was just plain smouldering!! He could calm me any day ;)

clubinthesky October 29 2007, 14:33:48 UTC

I'm afraid so, Sylar messed with her pretty head, poor thing =( I hope she realizes that she doesn't want to go bad, but it was kinda Sylar's trick to make her see things from his perspective (it worked LOL) hehe, your right, well i guess we know then on who's shoulder to cry on meheheh XD

razycrandomgirl September 10 2008, 07:34:52 UTC

Dude! This relationship is totally fucked. O_o but I guess understandable. strong personality mowing down the weaker, more dependent one. It so abusive.

I liked these parts:

"We're in this together now'"

Mohinder turned around and got a punch from Maya. ''Sorry.'' She added.

Snicker*