Comments | clumsygyrl: mini nanowrimo, word count 891, first bit of this fic-The Life You Save

clumsygyrl

mini nanowrimo, word count 891, first bit of this fic-The Life You Save

Nov 05, 2012 05:24

moar works in progress. just using mini nanowrimo to work through and plod along with stuff ( Read more... )

fic, the life you save, clint barton, mini nanowrimo, phil coulson, clint/coulson

Comments 6

hammerhead22 November 5 2012, 15:07:57 UTC

OMD, I LOVE THIS! My favorite part is the banter with Greg but the entire story needs to be written immediately. So good!

clumsygyrl November 6 2012, 00:00:02 UTC

I love snappy dialogue and I love when it... works out? I think I've blindly picked something else to work on today... but I will get back to TLYS some point this month. Clint busts his ass in school! Even with all the mocking from Greg!

dine November 5 2012, 15:27:06 UTC

terrific AU! great banter and fab character interactions, and I'm eager to see more

clumsygyrl November 6 2012, 00:00:46 UTC

thank you kindly, miss. I just kind of want Greg to be my friend too. Clint's a lucky bastard. haha. More with nurse!Clint at some point!

frausorge November 16 2012, 08:50:54 UTC

"bloody, arguing, and alive" - I love it. Also I love the idea of a Clint who's come through so much violence and chooses to take control of it a different way.

clumsygyrl November 17 2012, 02:42:02 UTC

It's one of those "paths not taken" or something. Like he understands why and the wherefore of sniping, but... I can see him just washing his hands of it. Especially when he could do other things. I am thinking tonight I'll write the "Clint meets Phil for the first time and of course one of them is bleeding" scene.