Elegy, for tragicllyhip, Gen - Reid, PG-13/FRT

[cmexchangemods]

Title: Elegy
Author: jujuberry136
Recipient: tragicllyhip
Pairing: Gen
Rating: PG-13/FRT
Word Count: 2,104
Warnings/spoilers: Violence
Summary/prompt: “My name is Spencer Reid, I am twenty-nine years old, I work for the Federal Bureau of Investigations in the Behavioral Analysis Unit. My brain is leaking.”
A/N: For tragicllyhip as a part of cm_exchange 2010’s fic exchange. Hope you

Comments

[daylyn]

I really liked how Reid slowly became more concious of his environment and how he used his brain to overcome the predicament. A good showing of Reid's strengths and his ability to remain focused despite his fears. Well done.

[jujuberry136]

Aw, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!

[kuriadalmatia]

Like daylyn, I enjoyed how Reid became aware of his environment and talked himself through his situation. I loved the description of "pouncing kittens" as Reid takes in his surroundings and figures out what should be done next. Nicely done!

[jujuberry136]

Reid and pouncing kittens are awesome together ;)

Glad you enjoyed!

[beatrice_otter]

I liked the way you showed Reid's thought processes.

[jujuberry136]

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed!

[tragicllyhip]

Wow, what an interesting take on one of my prompts. Thanks so much for doing this!:)

[jujuberry136]

Glad you enjoyed!

[innerslytherin]

“My name is Spencer Reid, I am twenty-nine years old, I work for the Federal Bureau of Investigations in the Behavioral Analysis Unit. My brain is leaking.”

OMG you won me over with this. *G* I definitely love the way you show Reid's thought process as he realizes what his situation is. The use of mythology is awesome. The little mention of lock picking and all the implications of Reid being locked in places by the bullies...heartbreaking, but also so in character.

And I love how Reid overpowers the unsub himself and rescues himself for once. That's a huge thing for me, so it was exciting to read this. :)

[jujuberry136]

Reid's a BAMF ;) Of course he's going to rescue himself and be all "Hotch? I need a ride. Also, caught the unsub for you, 'cause I'm that awesome."

Glad you enjoyed the brain leaking as well.