Comments | cmdr_jade: FIC: This Means War! [PG]

cmdr_jade

FIC: This Means War! [PG]

Apr 30, 2011 00:48

Title: This Means War!
Pairing: Leslie/Ben
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1324
Spoilers: 3x11 "Jerry's Painting"
Summary: Come here, use back window. Please hurry.

( Read more... )

fanfic, parks and rec, leslie/ben

Comments 44

fickery April 30 2011, 05:59:37 UTC

This was so, so cute and funny. This needs to be an actual episode. I had never heard of a marshmallow gun before this show and now I want one desperately. And there's something so cute about the way their interaction with April and Andy is half like they're their parents and half like they're all double-dating. And I love that Andy called Leslie Ben's woman. :D Wonderful job!

cmdr_jade May 3 2011, 13:59:49 UTC

Thank you so much! A few days before this ep aired, my fiancée and I were talking about how we wanted marshmallow guns to have an epic war with, so it was kind of like April and Andy read our minds! But, anyway, I'm really glad you liked this fic! Thanks so much for reading and leaving such kind words!

quick_ly April 30 2011, 06:03:54 UTC

This is possibly the most amazing thing ever!

cmdr_jade May 3 2011, 14:01:07 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

chrisfaithalin April 30 2011, 06:17:46 UTC

Aww, this was too cute and funny. I love the idea of Andy, April, and Ben having a marshmallow war over picking a movie. Great job.

cmdr_jade May 3 2011, 14:02:34 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed this! It'd have to be something small, yet important, to justify a war! :)

rikyl April 30 2011, 13:04:13 UTC

This is so cute and gave me so much joy! I want to see it on an episode, or at least see some of April and Andy bringing out the playful boyish Ben. Him getting Leslie to come over as backup was too awesome. Love Ben wearing something other than work clothes, Andy doing an accent, Ben not doing an accent ... pretty much love it all.

cmdr_jade May 3 2011, 14:04:46 UTC

Aw, thank you SO MUCH. I always love to see your comments on my fic. And I totally think that Ben has a really funny, really playful side under all that "responsible adult" stuff. And Andy is the perfect person to help bring it out (well, Leslie too, but, you know).

Anyway, I'm so happy that you liked it! Thanks, as always, for leaving such kind words!

qkellie April 30 2011, 13:55:52 UTC

Super adorable! :D

cmdr_jade May 3 2011, 14:05:11 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!