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[cnaorte]

when Your smil(ov)e parts;
lips (an)/d/e(ath)vide.
and inches (become) miles;
miles don't(he) seem too wide.
so i s(a)m(e)ile and i wait,
to enter the vast darkness spreadout
all around me around.
Your lips
ready, waiting,
!action.
exhale. Finally.
i wrap my arms around Your waist,
feeling Your chest
   e
  s
 i
r
and
f
 a
  l
   l
with every breath.
this is

Comments

[crimsontruth]

pretty
love
wonderful
boy

<3

[muffled_silence]

when i first read this I thought it was quite clever, but i kept wondersing how the stuff in bold and ( ) fit in, now i must say I really like that style.