Fic: Comfort of Fiends (6/6)

Apr 14, 2008 13:52

Author: Cobalt Mystic
Title: Comfort of Fiends
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: NC17 easily!!!!!!!!
Feedback: Mys has decided that she actually likes FB, so… constructive crit is fine, just be prepared for Mys to defend/explain her choices, and try not to do any permanent damage, k.
Disclaimer: Just playing with the pretty kittens. Unfortunately, ( Read more... )

fiends, fiend!verse, spander

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davinci_1985 April 14 2008, 22:19:18 UTC
Wow. I really, really loved this.

The Mys should write more. *nods*

I usually like Jesse as a good friend, but I love how you portrayed everything. We don't really know anything about Jesse, just that he was tall, dark-haired, and had been Willow's and Xander's friend. I can imagine a desperate Xander looking for any kind of comfort from the constant torture, both physical and emotional, even if it is to fall in the claws of a worse monster.

I also liked how you portrayed Xander's strength. He has been dealing with it for so very long, and still manages to function, which is something that also amazes Spike and one of the things that make him fall in love.

*sighs happily*

PS: The Mys *really* should write more.

PS 2: The sex scene? Way, waaaaaayyyy hot!!! (if you hadn't realized before, davinci does like her fangy!sex)

PS 3: Tell me you're planning on a sequel. More sex. More Harris-senior ass kicking. I'm not picky. *grins*

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cobalt_mystic April 15 2008, 09:48:46 UTC
Wow! And Mys says again, WOW! Thanks doesn't seem to cover that kind of praise...
The Harris Sr ass-kicking is in the works- you really think our Bee would let the Mys go without doing it once she mentioned she was even considering it, lol.

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daeomae April 15 2008, 06:45:29 UTC
Though this certainly DID have a dark beginning, you made everything all warm and fuzzy at the end. Well done!! :D

*Mwah*

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cobalt_mystic April 15 2008, 09:44:54 UTC
Thanks soooo much! This is the first time Mys has done anything even partially dark, just goes to show Mys can't let the boys stay unhappy, lol.

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brianapotter February 1 2009, 19:49:31 UTC
Ok, I just reread this and will soon reread the sequals. Can I just say how unbelievable this is? I am trying to type this while I desperately search for a tissue. I usually don't go for evil!Jesse that much, but he is beyond evil in this story. What kills me is the fact that 2 people, Jesse and Tony Harris, that are SUPPOSED to have souls, end up being more monsterous than Spike whom doesn't have a soul!!! Just goes to show how wrong everyone was about Spike. You can't go for 100 plus years loving and taking care of a completely insane vampire (sire or not) and not be able to love ( ... )

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cobalt_mystic February 2 2009, 00:41:44 UTC
*cuddles you and hands you fresh box of tissues* That was one of the best comments ever! Thank you!!!!!!

Hehe, yeah it was Snowflake- glad you see the connection there, was kinda worried it was just me, lol.

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