Author: Cobalt Mystic
Title: Comfort of Fiends
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: NC17 easily!!!!!!!!
Feedback: Mys has decided that she actually likes FB, so… constructive crit is fine, just be prepared for Mys to defend/explain her choices, and try not to do any permanent damage, k.
Disclaimer: Just playing with the pretty kittens. Unfortunately,
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The Mys should write more. *nods*
I usually like Jesse as a good friend, but I love how you portrayed everything. We don't really know anything about Jesse, just that he was tall, dark-haired, and had been Willow's and Xander's friend. I can imagine a desperate Xander looking for any kind of comfort from the constant torture, both physical and emotional, even if it is to fall in the claws of a worse monster.
I also liked how you portrayed Xander's strength. He has been dealing with it for so very long, and still manages to function, which is something that also amazes Spike and one of the things that make him fall in love.
*sighs happily*
PS: The Mys *really* should write more.
PS 2: The sex scene? Way, waaaaaayyyy hot!!! (if you hadn't realized before, davinci does like her fangy!sex)
PS 3: Tell me you're planning on a sequel. More sex. More Harris-senior ass kicking. I'm not picky. *grins*
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The Harris Sr ass-kicking is in the works- you really think our Bee would let the Mys go without doing it once she mentioned she was even considering it, lol.
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*Mwah*
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Hehe, yeah it was Snowflake- glad you see the connection there, was kinda worried it was just me, lol.
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