Comments | cobalt_mystic: Fic: Heart of a Slayer Ch 3-4 of 6

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Fic: Heart of a Slayer Ch 3-4 of 6

May 11, 2009 09:47

Author: Cobalt Mystic
Title: Heart of a Slayer Ch 3-4 of 6
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: NC17
Feedback: Mys has decided that she actually likes FB, so… constructive crit is fine, just be prepared for Mys to defend/explain her choices, and try not to do any permanent damage, k.
Disclaimer: Just playing with the pretty kittens. Unfortunately, they ( Read more... )

spander, heart, spring_with_xan

Comments 15

ex_kitty_al May 11 2009, 07:51:57 UTC

So great! Mys is the best!

cobalt_mystic May 11 2009, 20:38:47 UTC

*nuzzles* Thanks hun, still say you're prejudice, lol.

nothorse May 11 2009, 09:32:11 UTC

Cute. Very different genderbender.

cobalt_mystic May 11 2009, 20:39:23 UTC

Lol, thanks.. I think, lol. The Mys was going for different so that's good. :)

mulder200 May 11 2009, 10:39:06 UTC

OMG! You turned Xander into a girl? And not just any girl but a freaking Slayer?! Although, in a strange way, it kinda fits.

I can't wait for more.

cobalt_mystic May 11 2009, 20:40:14 UTC

Now that's the reaction Mys was looking for! :D

cynni13 May 11 2009, 16:58:28 UTC

Gulp. Yum!

I normally don't like gender-switch fics but I love this so far. I could totally see Xander being a Slayer if he were a girl. Like Spike said, it all seems to fit.

cobalt_mystic May 11 2009, 20:42:39 UTC

Aw, thanks! I know what you mean, the Mys isn't big on the gender fics either, but 'm glad this one's working so far. ;)

brianapotter May 12 2009, 03:31:18 UTC

Hey darlin'! Wow, what a way to update. Can I just say, for me to not be a fan of girl!xander or girl!spike, I loved this! It's amazing how well you did it. Even though Xander was a girl, I could absolutely see the old Xander shine through. Each scene that he was in and you mentioned that he was a girl, you would mention something else he would do or say and, presto!, Xander popped out. Fantastic!

Love Spike in this. I could completely see Spike doing everything you said (comforting Xander, speaking gently to him) and feeling everything he felt. I immediately pictured Spike sitting at Wolfram and Hart and going through his relationship with Buffy and seeing his feelings turn to Xander.

And can I just say how perfect the title of this story is? Perfect for Xander. For all that he had no superpowers, he definitely had the heart of one.

Missed you, but if this is the kind of story you will crank out, I can survive without my Mys fix. Hope all is well dear!

cobalt_mystic May 12 2009, 15:36:55 UTC

Hehehe, ohhhh, Mys takes it you missed Xandra's b-day fic attack then?
Xandra wanted fic, so she got fic, lol.
There was this WIP Spander fic, it's f-locked so you have to be logged in to LJ to see it- Mys'll unlock it once it's finished.
And a Reid/Lynch drabble.
And another PWP ficlet that will never see the light of day, well, it will and has, but since it's f-locked at my newest LJ and it only has 2 ppl on its f-list, the Mys thinks it's pretty safe, lol.

Thanks hun, 's always been my biggest issue with genderswap fics- when the 'swap' completely conceals/takes over the original character. I wanted to make this Xander as Xandery as possible, but still be believable as a girl. So glad to know it worked!

Well, if you get desperate Mys'll point you to where she's hiding all those drabbles and ficlets she usually cranks out between the bigger ones... it's just they aren't Spander. *shockhorrorgasp*

brianapotter May 13 2009, 00:35:13 UTC

You really have to ask if I want to read your drabbles? Of course I do!! *off to read Mys' fabulous stories*