Rhem's journal - The story so far

[cobaltie]

So, as a reminder to folks (especially since I don't post here much), I have a fiction-writing journal. I'm much more confident in how it's been going now that I have a few month's worth of story, and there's plenty more to go

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[cobaltie]

Thanks! The setting...well, still working on it, though a good deal of it's in my head and it's hard to keep track of what I've written out already in the story and what's still just notes. For this particular story, too, it's mainly just the characters wandering around in abstract and bizarre pieces of worlds. The novel proper should have more action in some bigger cities with more people in them.

Anything I can do to make the setting more clear? I'm open to suggestions! :-}