Spencer/Brendon High School AU fic exerpt!
Hey guys!!!! So, I'm working on a Brendon/Spencer high school AU fic right now and I've got it mostly outlined but I need opinions because I thrive on feedback. I'm a comment whore, and I admit it. Go on, throw stones at me.
Anyway, I picked out a short excerpt for you to read and comment on so that I know if I should continue on my way with this ( Read more... )
Anyway, I picked out a short excerpt for you to read and comment on so that I know if I should continue on my way with this ( Read more... )
Comments 1
a) I love high school AUs!
b) seriously, cuts are your friend. I nearly scrolled over it.
c) It didn't suck.
c2) It's in fact good, except for a few places where you fall into past tense from present. I personally like present best, but if you want to write past instead that's cool, you just need to pick one.
c3) In general people don't really write in CAPS, italics is pretty standard.
d) I love gossipwhore!Sisky
e) Poor Gabe. Everyone always thinks he's a creeper.
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