An arms length transaction.

Dec 04, 2010 15:16

In the brief moments before he killed himself, Rodney Jenkins thought of other people ( Read more... )

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supremegoddess1 December 4 2010, 21:21:51 UTC
bleak. i like it.

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cobycaroline December 5 2010, 21:05:31 UTC
S'how I roll. Thanks.

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jabber December 4 2010, 21:41:48 UTC
Wow. It gets dark early these days.

Well done.

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cobycaroline December 5 2010, 21:06:10 UTC
You should've read last season where my personal favorite entries were about death!

I shouldn't be so excited about that...

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jabber December 5 2010, 21:31:26 UTC
Are those still available? Do you have links?

I don't think there's anything bad about being able to touch difficult topics.

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drjeff December 4 2010, 22:17:08 UTC
Wow, powerful. And I love the first sentence. I'm way into the "grabbers" these days. :)

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cobycaroline December 5 2010, 21:06:43 UTC
Interesting that you say that. I feel like I can't get a good entry going if I don't have either a good "grabber" or ending line.

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imafarmgirl December 5 2010, 01:17:18 UTC
Fantastic piece of writing. I could feel the anticipation building.

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cobycaroline December 5 2010, 21:06:59 UTC
Many thanks, even though you already know the ending. :)

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alphaloria December 5 2010, 01:21:23 UTC
Incredible story. Bravo!

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cobycaroline December 5 2010, 21:07:10 UTC
Thanks!

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