I don't give a shit if this is an old one. Tell me about it.

[cockso]

And they tortued him with ballpeen hammers and hot needles as an infant, and they whipped him and beat him with strips from old inner tubes when he got older, and they poured fire ants into his ass when his skin became harder, and fed him small doses of cleaning solutions when they ran out of ideas but not fury. And they peeled off parts of his

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[ambitioushope]

the beginning left my face paralized in a horrored grimace

the end needs to be cleaned up. where you introduce new characters, yeahhh that needs to be tighter and more concrete. these are fragmented connections trowinto the story by the narrarator. which is fine but it's to much of a disconnect. and the end is just sloppy.

[swallowsleep]

i like this, even if it is imcomplete. i write the shortest shit and when i don't i'm always trying to end the shit before it should be.

yeah, son.

Yeah.

[seppuku_files]

Yeah, that conversatoin we had the other day. It makes sense. I wanted to feel like the pscyhopath / sociopath was still kind of human, like there was some kind of reasoning. I forgot what you'd said that sparked me to write this one, but this was directly prompted by a conversation I'd JUST had with you, that day or the day before, or some shit.

"Some people are JUST assholes. And you don't have to feel bad for not wanting to fuck with them."