Comments | coco_newt: fic: final destination (12/?)

coco_newt

fic: final destination (12/?)

Nov 18, 2011 17:45

Title: Final Destination (12/?)
Rating: R for language, mature content, sexuality, strong violence, horror, gore
Spoilers: Through Furt but everything to be safe. All Final Destination movies.
Summary: A Kinn spin on Final Destination. On their senior trip, Kurt has a vision and when several students are saved from a tragedy because of it, ( Read more... )

fic rating: r, kurt/finn, fic, final destination

Comments 8

aoitsukikage November 28 2011, 22:47:48 UTC

This is so heartbreaking in the best possible way, if that makes sense. Just...Kurt's guilt and Finn just *being* there for him is so sweet, and the end scene was perfect with the rain and the imagery you wove into it.

I'm still incredibly worried for Kurt and Puck, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see how that plays out...

coco_newt November 30 2011, 04:44:08 UTC

Thank you! I really wanted to paint the scene in this chapter, so I'm glad it worked and hit the right sad notes. And as for Kurt and Puck, yep. It'll play out. Soon.

epanaphoric November 28 2011, 23:47:05 UTC

The weather imagery in this was just breathtaking and made the situation seem to visceral. And your Sue was done brilliantly, and very faithful to canon.

I would say lovely job, but I'm not sure that's the most appropriate response for such an incredibly emotional chapter. Regardless, the way you can shift between moods so naturally and so suddenly is outstanding.

coco_newt November 30 2011, 04:52:23 UTC

I love writing Sue! She's so fun to play with. I'm glad I got it right. I really wanted to make the funeral and rain scenes vivid, so thank you so much. :) I really appreciate that.

daisy70 November 29 2011, 00:34:02 UTC

The funeral,Sue Sylvester,Burt and Kurt's conversation and the last scene in the rain between Kurt and Finn were so intense and emotional. I like how you portray the feelings of all the characters.A very good job.

coco_newt November 30 2011, 04:54:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

jantra79 November 30 2011, 13:42:33 UTC

I'm getting inceredibly nervous for Kurt - for Puck, too.
Quinn's death was absolutely devastating because it was so normal and could have happened to anybody. It was "ordinary" and fast, no building-up, therefore even more horrific to me.

Finn and Kurt are wonderful. And tragic.

Can't wait for the next chapter (but I don't want to read it, tbh).

jantra79 November 30 2011, 13:43:19 UTC

Oh, and Sue was phantastic.