Good job Kyle, but slightly hypocritical. You critisize people when I've seen you on a few occasions grinding with anything that walks. Oh well, everyone's a little bit dirty.
Ok, what I really think...deathshadow1May 22 2005, 17:24:58 UTC
Okay I didn't really like it. I thought you were trying to force your strong opinion down your audience's throat. Plus your editor didn't do their job. You say in your rant that, "Isn't it crazy that men objectify women, when we have women like Eleanor Roosevelt and Rosa Parks?" Well we HAD them, they are kind of dead now. It's true that society has become obsessed with sex but you could give better examples like beautiful thin girls on magazines perpetuating that all girls have to live up to that standard to be considered at least remotely attractive
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Re: Ok, what I really think...xdramaqueenxoMay 26 2005, 12:45:18 UTC
okay, i know you "critiqued" him but my opinion krystal is that i love the work he did asnd that he wasnt afraid to blurt out how he feels, if he is emotional strong enough to write scuh a strong and meaningful poem, then i dont think there is anything wrong with it. if he is happy with it then that is perfectly fine, and if he isnt then its perfectly fine. if kyle appreciates that changes you suggest thats fine, but i tihnk it is perfectly fine the way it is here because truthfully, i could never post a poem with such meaning because i would be afraid and too afraid of what peopl think . and another reason why i like it the way it is is because maybe he didnt want to eleborate, or maybe he just felt that way at the time he was writing it. so im sure he asked you to critique it, my personal opinion is that you critiqued it the way you imagined it, and not the way he did . and i dont want to sound rude, i respect the changes, but i like it the way it is now . it is perfect because it is genuine and true .
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(PS- Sorry Kyle, Love Richie)
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