A Boy and the Sea [5/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Five.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish but bordering on PG; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: Red car, blue car. Ten thousand stupid sheep jumping over the stupid fence.

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Five

Jaejoong wakes the next morning with a fog in his head and a name in

Comments

[thevirginia]

flsdhfdsj changmin! the suspense! i'm loving it. i wish i could be more coherent but i just woke up and read this 8D
the beginning with jaejoong talking to his mom, oh god that just breaks my heart -- esp when he said he didn't know his father anymore. struck a chord.
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[coconutjack]

jdsfhhfsd I LOVE YOUR ICON. 8D *squishes chun*

i can relate to the dad thing too.

[faricsyung]

It's 12.58AM and I was glad I'm not alone in the living room when I read this. You have a way with scaring us readers, and yes it's a compliment! xD

Changmin got more mysterious ~ I can't wait for his explanations. He comes and goes without a trace.. and he's not a ghost. I don't know what to think. ._.

I hope Jae'll make up to Junsu. He sounds upset. ;_;

Will await the next chapter. Thanks for this awesome one. ;DD <3

[coconutjack]

ahahaha! i scared myself while making this! *hits self* i'm sorta glad it came off the same way to you guys. sorta. haha. (at least i wasn't the only one who kept looking behind me while reading) XD

ahhh, you'll find out soon enough. XD

yes, su, poor bb. well, jae's pretty sensitive to his brother's needs anyway so he'll probably make it up to him. don't worry, su's pretty resilient. 8D

thanks very much, dearie
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[boojaesubabe]

This is completely amazing ^o^ The part when Jae was talking to his mom...it just broke my heart...and then I keep on thinking that Junsu never even got the chance to know mother *sadface* I'm happy Jae finally told one of the boys about his mother...he really needed an outlet. But holybajeejeez Changmin, he's one of the legend sea person, yes/yes? ^_^...and the lady Jae saw...was she the one the old man fell in love with and she lured him in too, and perhaps even killed him? I'm always looking forward to your updates even though I'm not on LJ too often ^o^

[coconutjack]

BINGO! 8D you got a lot right. ^^

won't say anymore naoo kthnxbye

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[314159]

Ahhhhhhh ♥ ♥ Can't wait to find out what exactly Changmin is. ;) Poor Yunho and Yoochun, it must have been kind of weird for them to watch Jaejoong jump the fence and run towards the house like a lunatic. Update soon!!

[coconutjack]

Poor Yunho and Yoochun, it must have been kind of weird for them to watch Jaejoong jump the fence and run towards the house like a lunatic.
-- LOL. that's a terrific way of putting it. XD

changmin will be explaining himself soon. ;) (when i finally figure out just how haha)

thanks, love
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[kurogoma]

woah, what did jaejoong actually saw??!!

Changmin looks as though he’s about to cry.

that makes me sad for some reason.
i am dying to know what's changmin's story.

[coconutjack]

he saw something he shouldn't have seen. ;D

ahhh changmin. yes, well, he's not such a sad little guy really. not for now, at least. XD

thanks, love
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