[Oneshot] Fine Line

Jan 03, 2008 10:08

Title: Fine Line
Character: Changmin POV; OT5 (Yoosu, Yunjae if you look close enough :])
Length: Oneshot
Rating/Genre: G
Summary: When the weight of a name is too much to bear

A/N: I'm sorry for this since it's kinda all over the place. I wrote this based on my own experience. Biking around the Han is extremely therapeutic. Will update 'Lost Boys' soon ( Read more... )

ot5, min

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kratynoi January 3 2008, 09:25:13 UTC
That story is beyond love. It was full of so many emotions, and I could really feel each that you portrayed through the boys. It leaves me speechless. ♥ You did a wonderful job. ^^

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coconutjack January 4 2008, 08:06:07 UTC
thank you so much! ^^ i'm glad you liked it! it's always fun to write ot5 because of their diverse personalities. ^^

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faricsyung January 3 2008, 12:11:03 UTC
Hangang.. From the pix, it's as beautiful as the boys' memory of it. Thanks for sharing such beauty. <3

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coconutjack January 4 2008, 08:08:28 UTC
yes, the hangang is extremely beautiful. although i'm not korean (just stayed there for a brief study period at one of their unis) i felt proud to have witnessed its splendor and majesty. the boys are lucky for having it at home. ^^

Thank you for reading!

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kurogoma January 3 2008, 14:14:22 UTC

I really really like this very much.
Stories where the boys get to have time to do normal everyday things that we take for granted, and then deriving so much pleasure from such simple activities is just ♥♥♥

I am adding this to memories.

Thanks!! :)

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coconutjack January 4 2008, 08:10:44 UTC
thank you! ^^
i imagine they would, seeing they're so busy with their careers and rarely have any time to just play like normal young people. i'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^

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blurmeese January 5 2008, 06:27:07 UTC
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Thank you for rendering me speechless. Really. This was just so GUH BEAUTIFUL and full of dongbang love XDD I really wish they do have day offs like this, the carefree, warm mood in this fic made me all :D You did a great job on the setting, very descriptive too and just...aish, I am in love with this fic and you for writing something as marvelous as this.

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coconutjack January 5 2008, 06:38:05 UTC
*huggles*

thank you!~ ^^ i'm glad the mood i wanted to convey could be seen. i really wish they could do this in real life. >_>

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snowflakes_nad May 27 2008, 11:08:24 UTC
“We may not have forever..but we have now. And we have us. That’s what we’ll always have.”
luv tht line. n ths is very well-written.. i'm fallng deeper n deeper into ur fics. heheh.

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