Lost Boys [11/11] + Epilogue

[coconutjack]

Title: Lost Boys
Character: Changmin-centric, but everyone's going to appear in it.
Length: 11/11 + Epilogue
Rating/Genre: PG in general; it's AU haha.
Summary: It’s empty of their laughter, their constant bickering, their presence, and it doesn’t take long for him to realize that he’s empty as well.

A/N: ARGH the epilogue didn't turn out so well as I

Comments

[butterflyweb]

I'm seriously all flutter and trying not to get teary-eyed because this was just honest to God perfection. I thought for a minute there you'd leave us without resolution or reunion and I was very, very unhappy, but alas, me of little faith.

The JaeMin scene and the posters were perfect, and Jaejoong cursing Min out as the both get over emotional just fits so well. You didn't sacrifice the raw scrape of their personalities against one another for pure sentiment, and that's what makes it all the more powerful.

So happy that they're all doing alright, and that this ended on a high, believable note.

What a fucking ride.

I cry sequel, and if not, more of your beautiful, beautiful work.

(And I never do this, but: first! *punches air*)

[coconutjack]

LOL at the "first! *punches air*" :)) that's cute

alas, no sequel nor fics for the meantime because fo *SOB* school. but i will try (to make fics, i mean. i don't think a sequel is possible in the near future. haha) ^^

thank you for reading and for the generous comments~! ^^

[kurogoma]

a;lkjsdfa;soeijasdf~!!!!

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keyboard smashing because I am too speechless with awe right now.

[kurogoma]

....and now that I have re-read it for like five times and able to think more coherently,

it is so apt that the story started with Jaejoong and Changmin, and concluded with Jaejoong and Changmin. The camera linking them together at both ends.

The way Jaejoong continues to curse and swear at their tearful reunion - such a Jaejoong-ish expression of affection and love XDD

This is just such an amazing story. I am happy that life finally dealt a better hand to the boys in life - Junsu got his bakery, YooChun his education and Yunho his health back, Jaejoong his self-respect and his family, and Changmin a better relationship with his father and in the end four great friends for life.

I love this fic so so much, and YOU are a damn good writer.

Mem'ed this and will continue to re-read this again and again. Or maybe I should just print it out, make it into a booklet and carry it around with me.

:P

[chloe1910]

kurogama! I love your comments about how the story started and ended with Jae & Minnie with the camera linking both ends together! It couldn't be more apt!

[coconutjack]

^^

i seriously don't know what to do with these comments and how to react to them. haha. but thank you very much for reading and for the generous comments! i hope everything you were worried about--jae's intentions, min's feelings etc.--was dealt with. and the booklet idea...i'm speechless! haha thanks very much dearie. ^^

[chloe1910]

iuyhiuyciuyhihfiuhfiuenhfkjwnefkkvkjhkvhkwvjhkgnskldgjsoivjeoijoi!!!

I'm freaking incoherrent now! This is so awesome and I love it! A perfect ending to a perfect story of 5 boys who found each other on the street and found friendship, brotherhood and life!

I'm glad that I'm right! Jae did accept Min as part of the family when he sell Min out to the police!

Woman!!!!!!!!Don't you dare said that this is not well-written! I wouldn't have it any other way!

[coconutjack]

glad you liked it! i was so freaking worried for this chapter, seriously. but hearing how much you guys like it makes me think otherwise! thank you very much for being such a staunch supporter of this fic. ^^ (you commented on every single chapter!)

and yes, you were right. ^^

[chloe1910]

My dear, I love this fic! Of course, I'll try to comment on every single chapter! You write wonderfully - the dose of angst and sappiness is perfect...not to much, not to little.

*throw confetti* I knew that Jae would not be so cold...Yes, he might look and act cold...but he has his own little weird ways to show that he care for someone.....

Actually, did Min's dad let them off after they were caught or did they manage to escape? I have a feeling that Min's dad is not as ruthless as he seems...Maybe a side-story on this part? What say you?

[coconutjack]

yes he has his weird ways. that's his style. ^^

good question. but i think they managed to escape and just made it out on their own. min's dad isn't ruthless at all. he just loves min too much. i'm thinking he was just glad to have min back and didn't care whether the police handed over jae and the others. i think he knew all along that min ran away, as well as the reasons for it. ^^

[chloe1910]

Is it posible for you to linked all the chapters into this? I would like to mem'ed this and it'd be easier if they're all link! Many thanks yeah!!!!!!!

[kattan69]

This story is beautiful. The characters and writings...excellent work! Hope you will continue writing another wonderful story. You have a talent here. Pls keep it up!

[coconutjack]

that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. thank you very much~! ^^