A Prayer Time Forgot [Prologue+1/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered
Rating: PG13, for a bit of cussing. I'm pretty sure it'll go up though.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: They wait, but it isn’t long before they’re scaling mud and water, black in

Comments

[faricsyung]

Chibi!Yoochun and English-speaking!Junsu. <3

The intro is very capturing. I don't mind supernatural stuff, as long as it's believable enough. Heh.

Thanks for this. Can't wait to see how things unveil. ;D

[coconutjack]

chibi!yoochun is love. XD so is english-speaking junsu.

i haven't fully made up my mind about how i'm going to go with this but rest asssured it's in the works. might be updating today or tomorrow. ^^

thanks for commenting!

[kurogoma]

i'm officially intrigued.

even though it's going to be yunjae, i am stalking this.
cos i love the way you write.
glad to see this new fic. ^^

six-year old micky yoochun is just sweet. is he staying six throughout the story?

[coconutjack]

aww thank you~! ^^ fair warning, however, with school and shizz getting in the way, updating might be slower than for Lost Boys. keke~
i'm not usually into pairings but thought i could give it a try. ^^

and yes, micky is staying a six-year-old here. heehee.

[chloe1910]

coconutjack!! you are back!!!I missed you terribly...

OMO, I forsee this is gonna be another awesome fic..wow..supernatural..and yay to your first blatant pairing for being YUNJAE!!!!!As you can see I'm a Yunjae shipper!!!

Little Yoochunnie sounded so cute....Is a shame thought that Siwom died so soon in the fic...OMG! Jae disappeared! I wonder what happen to Jae...since he was never found...but i truly pray that someone has saved him (duh? this should be the case right? otherwise, tehre wouldn't be a Yunjae pairing here right?)

Poor Yunho, so burdened with guilt over Jae's disappearance....

I'm officially stalking this...this is darn interesting and mysterious...

[coconutjack]

hey there!^^ i missed being here. school is...GAAHHH.
i'm not going to give away anything so stay tuned! will be updating soon!^^

[irerd_taga]

Is Jae a ghost in this fic? Will he be after revenge or will he help Yunho find peace within himself?
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

[coconutjack]

hehe. *grows horns* we'll see.
thank you for commenting!

[mickey8]

i love your AU. nevermind that it's somesort of a death fic *uuhhuk* but it's really an interesting start. there's suspense as early as the first sentence and you've wheeled the opening around so creatively that it's really twisting something inside of me while reading.

a dead JaeJoong, guilty YunHo, babyboy YooChun and YooChun-lovin JunSu. though it's kinda odd hearing YooChun calling YunHo by 'uncle'.. but then again, as long as it captures attention. ne? ^^

and the mere idea of you writing YunJae..is enough reason for me to stalk. keep it rolling! ^^

~~♥

[coconutjack]

MAN you guys catch on quickly. anyway i'm not giving anything away yet. thank you for the lovely comments and please stay tuned! hahaha. ^^

[mickey8]

well... people say rumors travel fast..but i say it's esp. fast when there are good fics! we can smell it! XD

you don't need to give away anything..all you need to give is update. *lolx*

i'll stalk you. may i? lahdfoafdhgang..

♥

[coconutjack]

i'm flattered. ^^ (the updates though...i'm a bit worried about those). stalk all you want! :D