APTF [3/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [3/?]
Rating: PG13, for a bit of cussing. I'm pretty sure it'll go up though.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: Yunho tastes blood in his mouth as he rushes from one aisle to another

Comments

[faricsyung]

The lines you put for your summary are my favourites from this chapter. <3

Yunho/Yoochun relationship feels very real. Yunho is still awkward with Yoochun and Yoochun tries hard not to show his needs for Yunho. Both of them refuse to show their dependency on others, it seems - Yunho's reluctance when Junsu asks. Men. Not really a bad thing, though. It's what drives them. ;D

Sometimes it's hard to put into words what you really have in mind, then there are times when you think you know how to but the page remains a blank. It happens. Don't worry too much about it. (Oh. I'm not turning into Yunho now. xD)

I really like the contrasts of your characters, especially between Yunho and Jaejoong. The opposites but connected. <3

Thanks for this. ^^v

[coconutjack]

protective!ho is always love. <3 and...that's a good observation. i never noticed that men DO have a weird way of showing/not showing their dependency on others. ^^ they're strange that way, hm? i sort of patterned their behavior on my dad and brothers (though they're not having problems of this sort, thank heavens haha).

(Oh. I'm not turning into Yunho now. xD)
ok, this made me laugh. :))

oh they'll be showcasing more of that. ^^ thanks too for the lovely commetns!

[irerd_taga]

Yunho, meet Kim Jaejoong! Waahhh, Yunho's mind going in loops and bends over this little tidbit. Did I imagine him? He was real, wasn't he Yoochun? I saw him disappear under the water, didn't I? All these questions must've been running around in Yunho's mind all that night.
Yoochun with his familiar comfort foods made me happy and sad at the same time! Happy because he seemed like his old chattering self and sad because it made his old life appear so far left behind there in NY.
And where will Yunho meet Jae the next time, I wonder?

[coconutjack]

yunho's very confused. not surprised. haha. poor ho. *pets*

yoochun's a darling, isn't he? i'm not sure if i can handle a child like him though. i think i'd go mad if i were yunho. >.>

you'll see in the next chapter~! ^^ thanks for commenting!

[kattan69]

Is Jae a ghost? Oh..Yunnie is scared. Looks like Jae survived and I wondered if he is here for something else. How did he survive and why he didn't go back? Pls update...can't wait for the Jaeho chapter.

[coconutjack]

haha. jaeho i think is going to come barrelling towards your screens like right about now. :o ^^ thanks for commenting!

[chloe1910]

wow...this is really getting more intriguing...you do make me wonder if Jaejoong here is just a hallucination on Yunho's part..but then..Yoochun did confirmed Jae's existence or did he?? Was Yoochun just givign Yunho a frightening nod to pacify his almost-distressed uncle??

Another probable answer would be that Jae is a ghost and he's back for something?? Shan't hink too much into this now...I guess I'll just wait for the coming updates to reveal more...

coconutjack..you're always good at keeping us in suspense....

[coconutjack]

ah my faithful reader. ^^ jae is an enigma for the most part, i don't think people will ever really figure him out until the end chapter. hihi. as an answer to your question, yes, yoochun did confirm jae's existence.

not going to answer anything else because it might give anything away. (as usual). haha. ^^ thanks for reading and commenting, chloe1910!

[zhyune]

OHH THIS IS SERIOUSLY GOOD. omigosh is jae a ghostie back for revenge?? THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD.
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