APTF [6/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [6/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: The room is cold despite the living room being flooded with white morning light coming in through the French

Comments

[kattan69]

That is so scary...and you just left us hanging like this. Luckily it is daytime from my place otherwise I will be getting nightmares. I'm still puzzling there are two Jaes (adult and dead boy)...wondering if they are twins or something....I'm thinking too much into this story. Anyway, thanks for writing and hope you can update soon.

[coconutjack]

haha, they're not twins, i can assure you. ^^ and i'm sorry for freaking you guys out! keke~ i actually wrote this in the daytime as well because my imagination works in overdrive at night. thanks for reading and commenting!

[_happy_as_rain_]

I love the subtlety of this fic: the motifs of darkness and light, and coldness. The little hints that suggest at the unnatural, put into parentheses so as to emphasize how casual it is, when it really is not. The hints are disturbing, foreshadowing, and completely interesting. I love love the cliffhanger at the end too. Very awesome writing. <3

[coconutjack]

ahh thank you~! i'm glad the feelings i've been trying to convey have succeeded in presenting themselves. your comment is a gem. <3 ^^ i'll update as soon as i can!

[mickey8]

WHY DO YOU WRITE GHOST STORY?!!!~ *dies*

i was smiling and aawww'ing over how sweet the whole story is... YunJae, they just seems to be meant for each other..like that..

then you have to spoil the mood (much to my dismay)...with that scary/creepy dead KJJ story!!!!!!!~~~

now i'm really thinking that the lover boy Jae has got something to do with the dead boy KJJ. god, tell me otherwise!~

gimme more love in the next update..like, please!~

♥

[coconutjack]

i've never written a ghost fic before and it's exciting even me! (*ahem*loser*ahem*) haha. yunjae is love but i have to break off the sweet stuff somehow, hence dead!jj. keke~ ^^ hang in there! thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[mickey8]

well, it's undeniable that the story you're writing is intriguing and really.. it's interesting. but being a sappy fangirl i am...it's obviously that i love them being all sweet and happy. hehehe...

*hanging*

now..you better update soon.. ^^

[irerd_taga]

OMG ghostboy!Jae has finally made his presence known to Yunho! Is he going to kill Yunho outright or toy with him for the moment? Will the adult Jae get back in time? Oh the suspense is killing me.....

[coconutjack]

we'll find out in the next chapter~! ^^ thanks for reading and commenting! hehe. sorry to keep you in suspense.

[atobekazuki]

Holy...hell....-shudders- That last part....was....terrifying...

Kinda reminded me of Mystery 6 with the SuJu boys. or The Ring.....-shivers-

I can't wait to find out what happens though. Atleast, now..though Yunho will believe Yoochun about the other boy. Ghost!Jae.....oh man...scary....

Make me wonder about Adult!Jaejoong......he kinda disappeared...and then suddenly boy!Jaejoong appeared.....Needless to say, that I can't wait to find out what's going to happen. lol

[coconutjack]

hmmm yunho's stubborn so i think it'll take more than a little appearance for him to totally believe yoochun. he is, after all, an all-knowing, more mature, more logical adult. (or so yunho thinks). XD i don't know, we'll see. ^^

adult!jae = boy!jae? i don't knoooow. ^^

thank you for reading and commenting!