APTF [7/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [7/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: “He’ll come back, won’t he, hyung?” Yoochun always asks, and Yunho always says yes, even though he’s never sure

Comments

[chloe1910]

spot!

coconutjack-shi..your stalker-shi is here...XD

[coconutjack]

my faithful one. you're always welcome. XD

[chloe1910]

I agree with you!! adult! Jaejoong is sounding more mysterious and creepy as the updates goes by...

If the adult!Jae & boy!Jae is for the same entity (but er, in different dimesion or something like that)..I hope that adult!Jae will fall in love with Yunho and Yoochun enough not to harm them in the end....

I know that this might sounds weird...but adult!Jae does gives me, Yunho and Yoochun a sense of comfort to a very, very large extent up till this point...

Argh...I hope that adult!Jae is a good person (I'm not even sure if he's human)!!

[chloe1910]

I forgot to add that the part where Yoochun drew another little boy creeps me up!!! Yunho can't you piece the picture together and figure out that that boy! Jaejoong might just be back????

Here, in this darkness, there are no wicked dreams. There are no crying mothers reaching out to hold him, to keep him safe. No lost little boys whose places he has to fill. “Stay, stay with me always, Jaejoong-ah,” his mother used to plead to him, her hands holding his. “Don’t let me lose you again.”
-This para sounds really suspicious and creepy...It's as if Jaejoong himself is trying to escape from someone's clutch or something like that. Why do I have a feeling that something or someone is making Jae doing something against his will????

Could the appearance of boy!Jae's is not what we think he is? That boy!Jae might actually be a warning to Yunho that something bad is about to happen???

Argh!! Sorry for my rambling!!! Please update soon...

[kurogoma]

Here, in this darkness, there are no wicked dreams. There are no crying mothers reaching out to hold him, to keep him safe. No lost little boys whose places he has to fill. “Stay, stay with me always, Jaejoong-ah,” his mother used to plead to him, her hands holding his. “Don’t let me lose you again.”

i just keep coming back to this bit, why does this disturb me so??? ^^;;

[coconutjack]

because it should! ^^ it's a clue. keke~!

[mickey8]

u know this is going to be creepier..and it's very obvious what Jaejoong's intentions are. coming into their live..make his presence strong and prominent..only to leave them when he's most needed.. just to give YunHo a heartbreaking 'heartbreak'.. the love KJJ is the deadboy KJJ HOmaigahh! *dies*

i'm making up my own assumption so ignore me. gimme something like yunjae happy forever in your story please? ~~~

it's really getting .. more obvious. the hints. yet, it's not telling enough.. god, you're evil.. update soon....

~~♥

[coconutjack]

you sound like you need a nice strong cup of tea. ^^ keke~~! don't stress too much about who's who (yet) since i'm not quite sure where this is going at the mo! i mean, i have plans but they keep changing every other day so...hehe. i'll do my best! thanks for reading and commenting!

[mickey8]

i just had a cup... boiling hot coffee.. ^^

i blame that on my over stressed presumption..but that's also because the story is eating me.. it has been quite some time since i have been stalking a fic like i do now.. u know, that says a lot ^^

whatever the outcome is..i believe it has to be interesting.. *pressure much* hahaha..

no, really... u can forget about all the comments.. all i meant to say was.. I LIKE THIS! ^^

[kahel_luna]

it's my first time commenting because finally i have companions when i'm reading it. x.x

no matter how much this fic gives me goosebumps, i am really awed. my mind is full of questions about jaejoong's mystery.

looking forward to your next update :)

[coconutjack]

i'll take your wariness as a compliment~ ^^ i don't like scary stories myself; i can only take it when i'm the one making it up. heeheehee.

if you can wait a bit more, jaejoong's character will start unfolding (unraveling might even be more of an accurate term) bit by bit. he's very...slow that way. ^^

thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[irerd_taga]

Was adult Jae adopted by ghostboy Jaejoong's mother after he died and made to change his name to Jaejoong?
And why doesn't he want to be photographed? Something to hide maybe?

[coconutjack]

i won't say a word. XD