APTF [8/?]

Mar 22, 2008 19:52

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [8/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: It’s a highly complex play, pretending that everything is all right.

A/N: Because it's Holy Week and I'd rather ( Read more... )

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chloe1910 March 22 2008, 13:38:52 UTC
OMG!!!!!!!!boy!Jaejoong is really back for vengence and he's luring Yoochun to his death!!!!! Please don't let anything bad happen to little Chunnie!!

Hm....I don't think that boy!Jaejoong is harmless anymore...I take back the part of my theory where boy!Jaejoong is harmless!!! He's as evil an sinister as a devil could be...

But I still think that adult!Jaejoong might not be there to harm them!! His presence is highly suspicious...but I truly don't think that he would harm Yunho and Yoochun. And I suspect that he's more alert about Yoochun's safety and all cause he might just know that something evil is going on...

OMG!!I'm sitting on the edge of my chair!!! The suspense is killing me!!

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:19:45 UTC
keke~ you're getting warmer. XD

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mickey8 March 22 2008, 14:01:53 UTC
lasdjfoagheaorgnwg!~~

i'm at lost of words.. damn!~

dead KJJ and adult KJJ sure has a connection..i don't care, there have to be a dead and an alive KJJ! and the alive KJJ is there to prevent the dead_creepy boy getting his way! the savior! lovelovelove.. :p

and god... Mickybo sounds so good, no? hehehe..i believe it was derived from a Jaeboo deprived YunHo.. XD

there shouldn't be anything happening to Chun baby...savior Jae..go to him!~

Jae's identity is getting more and more complicated..with his mom and all.. god, you just gotta hang us there..like that >.<

what should i say? alsdhfoafgafgnahg!~

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:25:56 UTC
LOL at the keysmashing. XD

i can only wish that adult!jae really is what you guys are expecting him to be, otherwise, i think i'm screwed. keke~

mickybo = i got it off an irish movie. i think the title's 'mickybo and me'. XD it was so cute i had to put it in.

keep hanging in there~! ^^ thanks for reading and commenting, love.

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mickey8 March 22 2008, 14:37:57 UTC
those are only expectations at the end of the day..it's your story..you're allow to do whatever to it (but please take those into considerations?).. XD

ah..there's a film with such title? if i read it then it'll be 'mickybo and me (mickey)' ?? hahhahaha.. it's cute, no doubt. ^^

*hanging* make sure you come back to save me.. =.=

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:47:01 UTC
i will, don't worry. XD

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314159 March 22 2008, 14:31:32 UTC
kldgjslkafjlksjdklaj MY SOUL IS BEING RIPPED APART OMG PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON FOR MY SANITY. *cries!*

gaaahhh this chapter was amazing. I wonder what's up with Jaejoong ;___; I really loved him in this chapter, even moreso than usual. especially at the end. flksjdg <3333 I hope Yoochun's okay ;____;

and the strange way that he can speak even without opening his mouth.
DIES

<3333333333333

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:51:44 UTC
*tries to piece back your soul as fast as it's being ripped apart* please don't die on me! XD

i loved jaejoong too in this chap. the characteristic i planned for him as being good at keeping himself together is coming out. he's being a good little character. *pets*

shall update as soon as i can! hang in there, love. :D

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kahel_luna March 22 2008, 14:45:50 UTC
young jaejoong reminds me of that kid in pet sematary and it scares me so much to relate it to that T_______T

my mind is occupied with lots of question marks enveloping the identity of the jaejoong that yunho's with. what person is he? my questions are not ceasing.

i shall wait patiently for your next update ^-^

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:54:45 UTC
i actually got the first idea for this story off a movie: flatliners. keke~ not anything related to stephen king but just thought i'd share. ^^

that's the clincher isn't it: WHAT, not WHO. trust me, i don't know either. XD forgive me.

thanks for reading and commenting!

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kahel_luna March 22 2008, 15:07:34 UTC
waaaaah flatliners. that movie scared me. but then oh, i remember something about that that might give a light on what jaejoong is.

and now there you go, you added like 10 more question marks on my pile of mysteries.

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 15:13:32 UTC
good luck on your rumination~! ^^ i'll try to lessen those question marks by the next chapter. (no promises though) XD

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applepieprinces March 22 2008, 14:50:16 UTC
omg.. nooo dont kill my baby yoochun!!!! noooo!!!!

yunho save my baby!! haha

the younger ver of jae is freakin me out... BIGTIME.. i get goosebumps

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 14:57:00 UTC
he's not dead...yet. if that can comfort you. ^^

boy!jae is a nightmare to write as much as he is probably a freak to read about. he's too controlling. i don't know if other writers have ever had such a demanding character before. XD (ok i don't really make sense. forgive me.)

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applepieprinces March 22 2008, 15:09:41 UTC
nahh but ILU none the less... hahaha!!! dude seriously im scared of little jae! i have a very good imagination and while im typing this im thinking he's in the middle of my freakin bed.. im scared.. shitless.. *gulps*

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coconutjack March 22 2008, 15:15:24 UTC
LOL! Don't DO THAT! now i'm starting to imagine him in the middle of MY bed! XD

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