APTF [10/13]

[coconutjack]

Chapter Ten

He remembers nothing of his childhood but sickness: constant fevers, delirium and coughing fits in the night. He remembers a lot of crying, of hands holding his face in the dark to coax him to eat, of tears falling like rain on his cheeks and hugs of a mother whose face he’s forgotten, to keep him warm. I’m sorry, is the last thing he

Comments

[kahel_luna]

In all honesty, I am a bit confused with this chapter. I am unsure of what Jaejoong really is and I think I have to reread it the moment I come home.

Nonetheless, I am not confused with the feelings I had when I read the part where Yunho woke up and found all traces of Jaejoong gone from his apartment. Nothing to hold on to. That must've hurt so bad. I'm glad he and Yoochun have a strong support team. Otherwise, it would be so easy to go down in spirals from there. Although, Yunho seemed to become an empty shell.

I don't know where this will go from here. As always, you keep me on my toes. ^-^ *tiptoes* update soon, sweetie. ♥

[coconutjack]

irerd_taga hit the nail right on the head. ^^ i think she explains it better than i ever could, too. so if you're lost...*points upward* heeheehee

separating jaeho hurt me too. >.< aish, yunho's too dependent on jae and his presence, but i think jae's the same with yunho and yoochun too, only he shows it differently. junsu and changminnie are nice kids, aren't they? even though junsu irks yunho at times, he's a good friend.

thank you as always for reading and commenting~! <3 ^^

[zhyune]

HOMG~ what's happening to yunnie?! He's being attacked by youngjae's ghost?! (ARGH JAE SAVE HIM!) I'm getting the whole story now XD*beams* so the kimjaejoong now isn't the one who's supposedly dead! *nods* Awesome...I hope yunjae gets back together ebcause its making everyone miserable ;;___;; *dabs eyes and sobs*

only 3 more chappies? keep on going, dear! fighting!:DD

[coconutjack]

glad you're getting it. ^^ argh the jaeho separation is hurting even ME. hahaha. i'll have the next chapter up as soon as it's finished! ^^

thanks, dear. ^^ <3

[314159]

................................. this chapter is so sad, I want to hug everyone :( except evil!Jaejoong since apparently he bashes people's heads in.

[coconutjack]

*offers sugary-sweet dbsk cookies to make you feel better*

evil!jae should be kept in a corner. sadly, he keeps escaping.

[_happy_as_rain_]

Wow. Powerful stuff--the pain of being left, and the dreams.

[coconutjack]

thanks! <3 :D i don't ever want to read this chapter again; it drains me.

[despair26]

You should have seen me when I finished reading this. It was about 2:30am and i'm out at the computer silently screaming so i wouldn't wake anyone up.
For about five minutes i was going
"WWWWHHHHHHAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT?!??!?" over and over again, and then it changed to "OMMMMFFFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG"
You rock<3

[coconutjack]

^^ i can relate to that feeling of silently screaming just so you won't wake anyone. hahaha. glad you liked! more soon!

thanks for reading and commenting!