APTF [11/13]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [11/13]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: You knew the code to the apartment…nobody else but us knew…

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Chapter Eleven

He doesn’t think, just runs,

Comments

[kroongho]

NIINNJJJAA

[coconutjack]

^__^

[kroongho]

I failed to finish reading because it was almost midnight and I was scared and tired. XD

BUT! DDD: JUNSU HOW COULD YOU? He'd never do that. ;_;
I feel so bad for them. That evil one is evil. T_T And I can't even REALLLY blame him, cause he's dead and just so angry and. :(

BUT NO CHUN DO NOT BELIEVE THE BOY! I will cry if you do sth to yourself. T_T

[coconutjack]

LOL at your first sentence. i'm actually having a hard time making this ghost scary. haha. he likes being violent more.

and yes, junsu. well. and the ghost. well. issues. they've all got issues. >.>

[kattan69]

Oh...can't wait for the next chapter..so that they will know that it is the ghost that did all those things and not the adult Jae.

And they better sort it out quick before the ghost takes Yoochun as well.

Pls continue and update!

[coconutjack]

i will! thanks for reading and reviewing, love. <3

(although i have to admit i've somehow painted myself into a corner with this one. haha. well, we'll see)

[kurogoma]

so the ghost had been tormenting jaejoong all these year, like a malevolent poltergeist. i am biting my nails in suspense hoping both yunho and yoochun will be ok. at least changmin believes jaejoong, and i hope everyone realizes something evil is at work here. update soon!!

[coconutjack]

oh yes. he's (ghostie) malevolent. and yes, changmin believes jae. he isn't the sort of boy who jumps into conclusions without proper evidence. ^^

thanks for reading and commenting, hun. <3 i'll try and update soon!

[coconutjack]

loves you too. ^^

[zhyune]

Just...wow. This is one of the best chapters! ^^) I liked the angst that Junsu portrayed, but honestly he's too impulsive for his own good.

I wish Jae would just spill the truth! Even if no one believes him. Before the ghost jae really does something bad, and I have a feeling he's gonna get Micky to kill himself once more~ *sniffles*

Thanks for the updates!:)) Hooray~~ gambatte~ FIGHTING!:D

[coconutjack]

yes, junsu is impulsive. but that's because he's protective too. ^^ i feel sorry for him actually.

i'm crossing my toes and fingers too that they'll intervene between yoochun and ghost!jae on time. ^^

glad you liked! thanks, love. <3