APTF [Final Chapter]

Jun 06, 2008 16:23

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [14/14]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: …Hey, this is Yunho and Yoochun Jung. We can’t come to the phone right now but if you leave us a message and ( Read more... )

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kurogoma June 6 2008, 08:37:57 UTC
;___________________; sniffles

damn it. i kinda expected it, but god it's just heartbreaking.
i started tearing when yoochun admitted to missing jaejoong too. he became a ten-year old adult taking care of his uncle while yunho became a shell filled with memories and thoughts of someone he lost.

i understand yunho's fear of forgetting, their short time together, how it's sad that there seemed to be no official records of him, that jaejoong's existence was like a wisp of almost nothing. i find myself very reluctant to let jaejoong go too.

and even though a small bit of me wishes that he didn't die, i also thought this is the more realistic ending.

'scuse me while i go back and pick up the pieces of my heart....

this is again amazing work.

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 09:16:51 UTC
thank you for sticking by this story. :D and your comments are spot-on.

i'm sorry i couldn't make it any happier. :(

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chloe1910 June 6 2008, 08:44:03 UTC
I believed the flying durians were from me...

Will be back with more coherrent comments later...I'm too heartbroken to comment anything properly....

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 09:20:39 UTC
i trieddd, chloe-sshi, i really did. D: i hate to disappoint, but i couldn't write it any other way. *sniffles*

*offers self to flying durians and red ants that usually crawl over them*

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chloe1910 June 6 2008, 13:39:56 UTC
YOU made me cry...honestly..I cried with Yunho and Jae till the end... Would you believe me if I tell you I'm still crying now while I'm typing? I swear..not joking...

This might not be the ending I want...but given the circumstances and your situation..this might be the best possible ending...I know it's rather impossible for an "all-happy ending". ghost!Jae would not have allowed that.

But I'm glad that Jae was watching over Yunho and Mickybo all these years. Yunho, I'm proud that you finally found the courage to let Jae go....

Even though this might not have been a happy ending, we could say that this is a rather good ending...both of them at least found their peace at last and I think that's the most important thing.

Another remarkable fic well done...Don't worry, I'll not fling any durians at you...I'm too disconsolate to do that...and I don't think I could bear hurting you...

Sob...I seriously need to find me some Jaeho fluff now...

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 13:58:58 UTC
i would believe you. really. considering that this really isn't a happy ending. *offers you happy!jaeho tissues*

yes, ghost!jae really would not have allowed it. that's why a happy ending was sooo not happening from the very beginning.

ahhh, i'm just glad jae got his peace. and yunho too. i couldn't stand either of them hurting any longer.

no durians? sure? you know i love you chloe-sshi. thank you for sticking by me. :)

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mickey8 June 6 2008, 08:56:51 UTC
ah...the original plan, huh? (=.=)

though it's really sad and pitiful how these souls were tattered by one misfortunate event (and the many that follow) but it's really such a good fic to follow along, through.

just too bad that the YunJae doesn't get their happy and danddy days in this.



p/s: but it's so angsty i can't help it! *launch Thai durians*

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 09:29:21 UTC
mianhamnida, mickey8-sshi. T__T i know you had wanted it happier.

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mickey8 June 6 2008, 15:53:20 UTC
call me Mickey (the 8 is for decoration purpose). i feel more special like that. heh! XD

i guess everyone's wanting the best for the boys...but as said, this is what best for the plot, your originality and your fic. you don't need to apologize, u know? ^^

so much love! ♥

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coconutjack June 7 2008, 05:14:20 UTC
gomawo. ^^

♥♥♥

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kroongho June 6 2008, 09:20:01 UTC
I AM NOT NINJA ENOUGH. D:

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 09:32:37 UTC
^^;;

thank you still, however for reading. <333

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kroongho June 6 2008, 09:37:01 UTC
I cried a bit. ;_;
I really am going to hate that mini JaeJoong ghost for the rest of my days. D:

:(

I'm sad now. *clutches heart*

*goes to find a fluffy JaeHo*

♥♥♥♥♥

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 11:45:13 UTC
i don't think mini!jae will be appearing in any fics anytime soon so don't worry.

*huggles*

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faricsyung June 6 2008, 09:27:26 UTC
I don't know.. This was a lot to comprehend.
Everything from the former chapters were somehow felt again. I'm just overwhelmed. I can tell for sure that my heart's broken, though. ;_;

Though I'm a sucker for happy endings, I'm not unaware that life has more thorns than the petals of roses in its bed. *sighs*

Feeling non-too-happy but that only means you wrote angst very well. Thank you for sharing your writings. <3

*sends a shield*

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coconutjack June 6 2008, 11:42:18 UTC
i agree. it could have been written better. i'm not happy with it actually. but i'm glad it's done so i can finally get on with my 3-d life. lol.

*fixes your broken heart one last time*

thank you very much for reading. :D

*takes shield*

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