A Boy and the Sea [3/?]
Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Three.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: "Seaweed and fish guts on rye."
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Three
Yunho and Yoochun, Jaejoong soon discovers, are talkers, and it takes their speaking engines very little time and effort before ( Read more... )
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Three.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: "Seaweed and fish guts on rye."
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Three
Yunho and Yoochun, Jaejoong soon discovers, are talkers, and it takes their speaking engines very little time and effort before ( Read more... )
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Muah, me be loving this fic more and more! It's just such a big contrast. If I were Jae, I'd rather stay with Yunho and Yoochun~
I have this feeling that Changmin is somewhat part of the legends that Yunho's mother was talking about. Ahh just a weird idea. (And I see that some of your other readers agree with this point too^^)
Thanks for the update! I know you're busy but gambatte! ^^
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if i were jae...well i don't know actually. jae still is a little bit loyal to his family, although he can't help but feel a little cheated on when it comes to comparing himself with yunchun.
re:min
well, you might actually be right ^^
yeahhh. but i'll try to update as fast as i can. ^^ thanks very much, love <3
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Ahh I see what you mean...but the atmosphere is just so gloomy D:
You're teasing again rawr.
Don't stress yourself out! I'm surprised you're busy but manage to write rather long chapters (yes, they're considered long, not that I'm complaining)...(DO YOU SLEEP?!)...
Here's a piece of dongbang chocolate to keep you going!
-passes you chocolate-
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awww thanks very much for your concern! i'm actually just fine. i'm trying to squeeze in as much chapters as i can before everything in my life gets too hectic. *snatches chocolate and gobbles it up greedily* ^^
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yunho and yoochun are awesome! playing chess on the tiles with kitchenware = really, really sweet. :3 the interaction is so lovely and humourous. i feel sad for jaejoong's family and i love that you write about it in a way that's real and not overly dramatic ♥ gah, i'm rambling. as always, bb!su owned me with his tiny part. and changmin!!11 gosh, so interesting!
:D ♥
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yunho was such a party pooper though, destroying the game before it was even finished. but they're so adorable aren't they? haha. i love them as 12yos (and su as a 4yo and min as...secret). XD ^^
thank you and i'm glad you like it!
<333
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you're too kind! thank you very much! <333
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Anyway~ I really loved this chapter~ Sandwich guts...lol! I used to think that same thing when I was a kid~ ^_^
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we'll find out soon. :D though you managed to hit on one of my original ideas shhhhhh XD
sandwiches are such a pain when they have too much in them. yunho failing at holding them was jsut too good to pass up. :D
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i think changmin is gonna become really important to jaejoong=)
so next chapter are we gonna hear the folklore?
lovely chapter. i'm beginning to find your work inspiring. this piece has a lil jaemin going on tho, in my opinion=D
i have my own story too buut it's so hard to start even tho i have the whole thing planned out more or less=(
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i'm pulling things out of a hat here. the folklore i think i'm going to have to invent. lol. XD
oh my, you're too kind! don't worry about your own story. starting is always the hardest. try experimenting on lines you think are catchy, or try lines from a song, or a quote. :) fighting!
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