Short: En Français Sil-tu plait

Oct 02, 2009 00:06

En Français Sil-Tu Plait
Onew/Key ; G
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rating: g, couple: onew/key, short, love: shinee

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pcd_intraining October 2 2009, 06:02:05 UTC
hehe that was awesome!!

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dehchan October 2 2009, 10:44:17 UTC
omg that just made my day.
awesome useage of the wonderful wonderful french there.

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rabbitdrops October 2 2009, 13:46:50 UTC
I JUST GOT HOME LOLZ.. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW GOOD YOU'VE MADE MY DAY! SERIOUSLY! THIS DAY HAS BEEN A PAIN IN THE BUTT.. I WAS ABOUT TO HEADDESK BEFORE I CHECKED MY FRIEND PAGE.. AND I SEE THIS! GAAAAH THIS! *turning caps off now*

the french was lovely! the OnKey conversing in french was so cute.. and Onew's so happy that he learned it for Key.. too bad though due to Jonghyun's prank LOL

i wish i could speak freaking french! and i'd bombard you with words LOL.. ILYSFM! asdfghjkl

as long as its OnKey dear i am HAPPY~ :DDDD you dont have to make another one! make it nc17 and were gooood LOL just kidding HAHAHAHA!

i shall drown you with love ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ thank you for this so much!

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rabbitdrops October 2 2009, 13:52:41 UTC
i just reread this.. and you know what?.. why does Onew speaking in french sound so HOT?! omg i'll be rereading those french parts again and again ♥

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coffee_appeal October 3 2009, 01:03:26 UTC
LOL! I'm glad it cheered you up. The French isn't really good since I always follow the grammatical structure for English for French and really, my French is a bit questionable!

But I am really glad you liked it :)

LOL. Just say it all in English and it would be the same effect, AHAHAHA XDDD. I don't mind writing an NC-17, but I just can't seem to write it quickly due to brain farting reasons, ahahahha.

This may be late to ask, but girlie, what is your name? LOL.

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rabbitdrops October 3 2009, 14:15:50 UTC
i have know idea how to speak french so no need to apologize! HAHAHAHA

and yes i really do like it :DDD

LOL oh i was just kidding on the nc17 not HAHAHAHA but if you write one (no matter what the pairing) i would be happy to read it~.. BRAIN FARTING♥

my.. name? HAHAHA its cez :D or you can call me steph.. im used to being called my first or second name~.. how about you? :DD

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read0write October 2 2009, 16:14:42 UTC
aww...poor jinki, how could jonghyun do that to him? that was so mean
lol i like how jonghyun randomly knows french XD

lol i'd love to hear jinki speak french :D
very cute :D

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lily_ina October 2 2009, 19:55:57 UTC
Ton français est bien! J'ai vu pire! Je ne comprend pas les - entres le verbes et le sujets, mais la structure et les mots employés sont relativement corrects!

My first language is French and honestly I saw way worst French sentences in my life! Sure, it's not perfect, the verbs are not all well-written and you don't seem to have seen the rule for the compléments d'objet direct just yet, but it's okay! The pronouns are not very well used too, but it's normal because there are so much diffrence between French and English! Even French speakers have trouble with grammar! XD (And French-speakers usually can't so the 'th' sound in English ( ... )

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coffee_appeal October 3 2009, 00:57:51 UTC
Hi loves, you know what I do not mind that you correct my French because honestly, I am not good at French whatsoever. I've been taking French class for like, almost three years now and it's not nearly as great as some people who I know who've taken just as long as me, and they're practically fluent! LOL!

French is my third language, and I just get so caught up with French, English and Tagalog I just get all messed up with languages ~~

I thought it was coucher! I swear! But than I was like...wait and completely hesitated to use that instead. If it's okay with you, can I use your correction instead? ^^;

LOL. Well, Hello from the U.S.! XDD I'm glad you were honest with the French and stuff because I sorta wanted someone who does converse and whatnot in French fluently to see what is wrong and what should be corrected.

Thank you so much for helping out and reading too! You're too awesome ~ I can just imagine them trying to speak French, with the accents especially XDD.

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coffee_appeal October 3 2009, 01:09:31 UTC
LOL. I MISSED THE FRENCH PART YOU SAID. My font is so light *_____*

Anyways, thank you! I have like, issues with the verbs and structure of the sentences because I am used to writing it much like how English is constructed gramatically. You honestly inspire me to do better in French class now.

No joke here man, I am inspired! :D

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lily_ina October 3 2009, 03:17:14 UTC
XD It's okay I didn't say anything important anyway ( ... )

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